Steve's Story-Poems
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Comment from misscookie
I must confess this poem at first made my skin crawl about those insects.
The you child meant well to do go for his family its a shame it went from bad to worst and at times I thought it was mighty funny.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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I must confess this poem at first made my skin crawl about those insects.
The you child meant well to do go for his family its a shame it went from bad to worst and at times I thought it was mighty funny.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thank you, Miss Cookie!
Steve
Comment from Righteous Riter
Good eye attracting photo that makes my skin crawl. Good, clear story telling. Good description that draws an imaginary in the mind of the reader. Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Nice flow accompanied by a clear message.
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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Good eye attracting photo that makes my skin crawl. Good, clear story telling. Good description that draws an imaginary in the mind of the reader. Good use of the aabb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Nice flow accompanied by a clear message.
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Comment Written 26-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2013
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Thanks for the kind words.
Steve