All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 " One Pure Note"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Lovely words and talented The expression is good and the script of the poem well presented. I enjoyed reading the poem. thanks for sharing with me.Mary
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Lovely words and talented The expression is good and the script of the poem well presented. I enjoyed reading the poem. thanks for sharing with me.Mary
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much Mary Ann - I'm so glad you loved this one! and a special thank you for your magic 'six' my dear!
Blessings,
Sharyn
Comment from Cornetist
Congratulations! Your poem surely deserves top honors. You present the idea of "uplifting" in contrasting verses going from all the way down to all the way up (As the structure of your poem demonstrates...kind of in an upside-down sorta way!!). Interesting the way your rhymes skip and slide...showing up in all sorts of places! You show an agile pen!
Cornetist
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Congratulations! Your poem surely deserves top honors. You present the idea of "uplifting" in contrasting verses going from all the way down to all the way up (As the structure of your poem demonstrates...kind of in an upside-down sorta way!!). Interesting the way your rhymes skip and slide...showing up in all sorts of places! You show an agile pen!
Cornetist
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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hey, thank you so much Cornetist! I do love playing with words and shapes of poetry - bless you!
Best wishes
Sharyn
Comment from Writingfundimension
Hi, Sharyn. I can see why this gorgeous poem won the contest. Not only is it exquisitely written, but it does lift my spirits -- just as music often does. Congratulations on another deserved win. Warm regards, Bev
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Hi, Sharyn. I can see why this gorgeous poem won the contest. Not only is it exquisitely written, but it does lift my spirits -- just as music often does. Congratulations on another deserved win. Warm regards, Bev
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Thank you so much for "getting" this one, Bev!
Blessings
Sharyn
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You're most welcome, Sharyn.
Comment from el twelve
that certainly was lovely to read, it was smooth for easy reading and was definitely uplifting, made one feel like there is hope. Smiled while I read
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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that certainly was lovely to read, it was smooth for easy reading and was definitely uplifting, made one feel like there is hope. Smiled while I read
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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thx so much el - it was intended to leave you with a smile, so I'm happy you did just that, my deaer!
Best wishes
Sharyn
Comment from adewpearl
Congratulations on your contest win
:-)
I love the imagery and alliteration in singing salt-water Ophelia
good internal rhyme in deep to sleep
good alliteration in crack the classic
excellent sensory appeal
good internal rhyme in notes float
alliteration in myth/music/mist
sculls screaming - great alliteration and concrete imagery that creates mood very effectively
what a wonderfully uplifting closing! :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Congratulations on your contest win
:-)
I love the imagery and alliteration in singing salt-water Ophelia
good internal rhyme in deep to sleep
good alliteration in crack the classic
excellent sensory appeal
good internal rhyme in notes float
alliteration in myth/music/mist
sculls screaming - great alliteration and concrete imagery that creates mood very effectively
what a wonderfully uplifting closing! :-) Brooke
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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thx so much Brooke! :)S
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello to you visionary1234
I can see why you were awarded lst prize. You showed sadness and then is the closing or your poem the wonderful sound of Happiness
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Hello to you visionary1234
I can see why you were awarded lst prize. You showed sadness and then is the closing or your poem the wonderful sound of Happiness
Gert
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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thx so much Gert! :) Sharyn
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You are welcome Sharyn
Gert
Comment from Doc Holiday
The lower we believe we are the more uplifted we feel we can get. I do believe there is a thin line that separates our emotions and can be turned on and off with a small degree of attitude change in perception. Your poem points that out very well. Congratulations in your contest win!
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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The lower we believe we are the more uplifted we feel we can get. I do believe there is a thin line that separates our emotions and can be turned on and off with a small degree of attitude change in perception. Your poem points that out very well. Congratulations in your contest win!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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You've got it right there, Doc. Thank you so much for "getting" the theme of my poem.
Blessings
sharyn
Comment from justatuna
Another great job, Sharyn. Congratulations yet another win. Every time I turn around, there you are. I really enjoyed this and wouldn't make a change. I like how you seem to always tie your surroundings into the fabric of the lives of others. Maybe it's just me.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Another great job, Sharyn. Congratulations yet another win. Every time I turn around, there you are. I really enjoyed this and wouldn't make a change. I like how you seem to always tie your surroundings into the fabric of the lives of others. Maybe it's just me.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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thx Rob ... honestly, have no idea where stuff comes from, but I know it's all based on things that I have experienced directly - somehow I managed to tweak them into something else and I usually "know" when it's "right".
:)S
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
Congratulations for winning in the Uplifting Poetry! Contest.
You take us readers on adventurous journey from sadness and sorrow to he brightness of tomorrow because you tuned into he songs of life in nature. This is truly a great write and it deserves six stars but I am not allowed to give them. Thanks for sharing. Your friend, Bob
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Congratulations for winning in the Uplifting Poetry! Contest.
You take us readers on adventurous journey from sadness and sorrow to he brightness of tomorrow because you tuned into he songs of life in nature. This is truly a great write and it deserves six stars but I am not allowed to give them. Thanks for sharing. Your friend, Bob
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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So glad you caught this one Bob - I enjoyed writing it! Part of it was actually based on my sitting outside on a cliff top outside my singing teacher's house, and listening to the previous student singing something unbearably gorgeous - I've never forgotten that impression. Bless you for your virtual '6' too - always so appreciated, as is your reading & understanding!
:) Sharyn
Comment from Jean Lutz
Congratulations on the well deserved win. Your words sent out to the world via the web traveled right to the soul of this reader. Keep sending them out and may the blessings come back a hundred fold.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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Congratulations on the well deserved win. Your words sent out to the world via the web traveled right to the soul of this reader. Keep sending them out and may the blessings come back a hundred fold.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2012
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2012
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thank you so much Jean!
Blessings for your Sunday morning!
Sharyn