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All Those Puzzling Pieces

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What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?

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Comment from whispersofthesoul
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Hiya,
I have to say this is a very worthy winner i loved reading this It has made me chuckle It is just fun piece but it still held the sincerity

Congratulations
Whispers xx

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
    thx so much whispers - and yes, there is sincerity there - what would our writing be without that, hmm?
    Blessings
    :)Sharyn
Comment from Tina McKala
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Wonderful poem full of sentiment, remembering good old days, though we get old and we change, memories are here to stay. Good luck in the contest, I really enjoyed this! Tina

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
    thx Tina!
Comment from Melspoems
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I loved this, and can see why it is a contest winner, very deserved.
It's fun and real and I love the comparisons between then and now, somethings change and some stay the same.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
    only gravity keeps changing us unfortunately Mel ... thx for reading & reviewing!
    :)Sharyn
Comment from SnowPhoenix
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I don't hand out this rating often, but I just *LOVED* this poem! LOL - brought back so many memories: my first pair of jeans, my first glimpse of that alternate lifestyle - ahhh, those were good times, Baby!

Go with the flow - oh yes, it does that indeed! Beautiful read!!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
    I'm so glad you loved it SP - I had a lot of fun writing it! and yes, they WERE good times baby - a brave generation! A huge thank you, too, for one of your rare and lovely '6's! You've just made my morning even better!
    Blessings,
    Sharyn
Comment from marycec
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Oh the nostalgia! A very funny read I could identify with.i got the butt of your joke joke immediately and chuckled.We were a lucky generation! Love the beat and I've still got the beads too! One to tap along too for sure.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
    for sure! thx so much mary!
    :)Sharyn
Comment from OLA THOMAS
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I cherish the mastery of the creativity you put into this strange contest. I really see the in depht of deep thought you exibited in the work. I was a contestant too.

ola thomas

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
    It was a strange contest, wasn't it Ola? which one was your piece??? thx so much for reading & enjoying!
    Blessings
    Sharyn
reply by OLA THOMAS on 21-Aug-2012
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    Thanks dear. Mine was 'Oh! You This Tom'. I saw the contest very challenging and interesting. Thanks again.
Comment from Chrisfiore
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Hi v1234,

I liked this little nostalgic walk through the sixties very much. Easy to see why it is a winner.

Too bad much of what was going on during that time got shuffled up with the drug culture, otherwise much of what I was feeling then I still feel today.

Peace.

Chrisfiore

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
    me too Chris - but than heaven never got into the drug thing - and yes, it's a pity that that's probably a lot of what the 60's will be remembered for - whereas in reality it was a brave generation who actually started to question what the hell their own government was up to! thx so much for reviewing!
    Blessing
    Sharyn
Comment from robina1978
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Many congratulation on your win. You certainly deserved it with this very original free verse. Liked that you went from young till old- now. Can relate to this.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
    thx so much robina!
    :) Sharyn
reply by robina1978 on 21-Aug-2012
    very welcome, a joy to read. Ine
Comment from dhee khaye
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What a wonderful poem! I love reading it! You'r a great poet. You got a very artistic intellect. Thank you for sharing. God Bless.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2012
    thx dhee!
Comment from Donya Quijote
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I think there is a little hippy in all of us. I was growing up when the hippies began to revert back to being more responsible adults. The first movement of this poem was my fav as it reminded of the lyrics from on my favorite Broadway musicals: Hair, not to forget Jesus Christ Super Star. A very interesting and personal write. Thanks for sharing and congrats on your contest win...

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2012

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2012
    thx Donya!
reply by Donya Quijote on 19-Aug-2012
    Glad you got the meaning. Looks like fingers could kept up with my mind and I neglected to type a few words. You're welcome...