I Took A Chance
Love Poem Poetry Contest Submission67 total reviews
Comment from zlp22
If you don't take chances, nothing will ever happen in life. Great word flow, interesting and easy to read, a good entry for the contest. Good luck.
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If you don't take chances, nothing will ever happen in life. Great word flow, interesting and easy to read, a good entry for the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from visionary1234
Loved your black & white/ short & succinct punchy presentation here - we follow your thoughts like a butterfly zipping around the garden! Delightful! Only suggestion I may have would be that you don't use capitals at the start of every line - to my mind it tends to interfere with the flow of the one thought - so I'd go with a capital for each new thought, no other punctuation necessary ... my two cents worth!
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Loved your black & white/ short & succinct punchy presentation here - we follow your thoughts like a butterfly zipping around the garden! Delightful! Only suggestion I may have would be that you don't use capitals at the start of every line - to my mind it tends to interfere with the flow of the one thought - so I'd go with a capital for each new thought, no other punctuation necessary ... my two cents worth!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from Joy Graham
This is really very beautiful. You used simple words which go very deep. I can relate to this message. Many of us have been here "Afraid of love / And life / Then you came". I love the way you summed it up in the end with "Took a chance / And lived". Best wishes to you in this contest, this is a very wonderful entry!
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This is really very beautiful. You used simple words which go very deep. I can relate to this message. Many of us have been here "Afraid of love / And life / Then you came". I love the way you summed it up in the end with "Took a chance / And lived". Best wishes to you in this contest, this is a very wonderful entry!
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from rtobaygo
BEAUTIFUL, MEANINGFUL POEM FROM THE DEPTHS OF A FORLORN LOVER TO THE HEART OF ONE THAT HAS FOUND TRUE LOVE ONCE AGAIN. ALL DONE IN A STYLE REQUIRING NO PUNCTUATION. EXCELLENT EXAMPLE OF FINE POETRY!
TAKE CARE,
RAY
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BEAUTIFUL, MEANINGFUL POEM FROM THE DEPTHS OF A FORLORN LOVER TO THE HEART OF ONE THAT HAS FOUND TRUE LOVE ONCE AGAIN. ALL DONE IN A STYLE REQUIRING NO PUNCTUATION. EXCELLENT EXAMPLE OF FINE POETRY!
TAKE CARE,
RAY
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from cce29
Great soft yet meaningful photo for your poem. Yu set it up perfectly, so it hits hard where itkshould. I wish you luck in the contest. It is better to live, and know love, than to not live and never experience love.
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Great soft yet meaningful photo for your poem. Yu set it up perfectly, so it hits hard where itkshould. I wish you luck in the contest. It is better to live, and know love, than to not live and never experience love.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from snemes
I enjoyed your poem. Feeling worthless and forlorn. You ackowlegde the pain. Afraid of love and life. Then you bring in hope. Filled with hopes and dreams. Then you end it in such an uplifting way. Took a chance and loved. Took a chance and lived. Thank you for sharing this.
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I enjoyed your poem. Feeling worthless and forlorn. You ackowlegde the pain. Afraid of love and life. Then you bring in hope. Filled with hopes and dreams. Then you end it in such an uplifting way. Took a chance and loved. Took a chance and lived. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This was a lovely poem for this contest. I thought you penned "love" and the risks well.
Overall a great work and a great submission for the contest.
Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Maureen
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This was a lovely poem for this contest. I thought you penned "love" and the risks well.
Overall a great work and a great submission for the contest.
Thanks for sharing and good luck.
Maureen
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2012
