A Life Disrupted
The tragedy of Alzheimers62 total reviews
Comment from dportwood
jlsavell,
I am so sorry for your loss. Your poem is well constructed and definitely tells its story. I like the quatrain structure and the rhyming pattern. Well done.
Duane
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reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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jlsavell,
I am so sorry for your loss. Your poem is well constructed and definitely tells its story. I like the quatrain structure and the rhyming pattern. Well done.
Duane
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Comment Written 11-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Duane, once again thank you ever so much... jlsavell
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is a beautiful poem. It is well written, well edited, and nicely presented. The words in the poem are deeply emotional and written with sensitivity and feeling. The stanzas are evenly balanced and the rhyme and meter are as close to perfect as one can get- well deserving of six stars!
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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This is a beautiful poem. It is well written, well edited, and nicely presented. The words in the poem are deeply emotional and written with sensitivity and feeling. The stanzas are evenly balanced and the rhyme and meter are as close to perfect as one can get- well deserving of six stars!
Comment Written 11-May-2012
reply by the author on 17-May-2012
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Sara-Goldwell, oh my, I am truly humbled and one cloud nine that you would find this work exceptional... Thank you ever so much Sarah, thank you... jlsavell