Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Embrace Integrity"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
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Comment from rjuselius
it's a fine poem about growing up in today's world.
as is said "we do not inherit the land from our ancestors, we borrow it from our children". the children have a heavy load to carry after we've nearly screwed it up.
i especially love this part:
"This is My plea to you, My youth:
Build on the foundation of love and truth.
Negative thoughts rebuke and fight.
Fill your life with Love's warm light"
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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it's a fine poem about growing up in today's world.
as is said "we do not inherit the land from our ancestors, we borrow it from our children". the children have a heavy load to carry after we've nearly screwed it up.
i especially love this part:
"This is My plea to you, My youth:
Build on the foundation of love and truth.
Negative thoughts rebuke and fight.
Fill your life with Love's warm light"
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Dear rjuselius. I'm so glad you like me poetry and hope these words that you mention will be a help and a strength to to you now and in the future. With kindness, Sarah
Comment from ameen786
Hello Sarah, my friend the road to integrity is indeed rugged but with devotion/faith,"The first place must belong to Me, serve Me in truth and humility,"--with this motto, one could never stumble on that rugged road. Beautiful, sublime poetry my friend with excellent rhyming, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Hello Sarah, my friend the road to integrity is indeed rugged but with devotion/faith,"The first place must belong to Me, serve Me in truth and humility,"--with this motto, one could never stumble on that rugged road. Beautiful, sublime poetry my friend with excellent rhyming, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from c_lucas
The young is being short changed in every aspect of life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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The young is being short changed in every aspect of life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
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You're welcome Sara. Charlie
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Comment from fairydancer
I absolutely agree - integrity is vital, not only for society, but for individual happiness. Unfortunately it is often a lesson we have to learn the hard way.
Exellent poem with good quatrain form, rhymes and flow. Well written - Cally :)
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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I absolutely agree - integrity is vital, not only for society, but for individual happiness. Unfortunately it is often a lesson we have to learn the hard way.
Exellent poem with good quatrain form, rhymes and flow. Well written - Cally :)
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from hopeflys
Loved it. It's a very good poem and I like your message. I also like your notes (wow love the picture) well done and good work 0:D
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Loved it. It's a very good poem and I like your message. I also like your notes (wow love the picture) well done and good work 0:D
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi sarahice,
You have penned a fine poem with a powerful message. You have a lyrical rhyming couplets and expressive word choices. If only we could hear God speaking to us I think these are the words He might speak. Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Hi sarahice,
You have penned a fine poem with a powerful message. You have a lyrical rhyming couplets and expressive word choices. If only we could hear God speaking to us I think these are the words He might speak. Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from skye
True advice, great words to lead anyone to a higher place. There is nothing better than living a life filled with integrity and honesty.
Your rhymes are strong, your images and advice make this poem well done, indeed.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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True advice, great words to lead anyone to a higher place. There is nothing better than living a life filled with integrity and honesty.
Your rhymes are strong, your images and advice make this poem well done, indeed.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from cathmine
sara, your beautiful poem, with rhymes and free rhythm, was to me a call from God. It read as though He were speaking these words to His children.
The integrity issue is reminiscent of the Golden Rule.
Very thoughtful write, and thought-provoking to read.
Cathmine
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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sara, your beautiful poem, with rhymes and free rhythm, was to me a call from God. It read as though He were speaking these words to His children.
The integrity issue is reminiscent of the Golden Rule.
Very thoughtful write, and thought-provoking to read.
Cathmine
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from Carrie Carson
Fabulous. I would not have thought a perfect stranger could condense twenty eights year of my life in such fashion. At work, they wouldn't publish my Ode to a Bureuacrat in our Department's newsletter. Your right our ranks are thin.
Fabulous.
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Fabulous. I would not have thought a perfect stranger could condense twenty eights year of my life in such fashion. At work, they wouldn't publish my Ode to a Bureuacrat in our Department's newsletter. Your right our ranks are thin.
Fabulous.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from TammyGail
Your poem was written to perfection - well expressed your color scheme and imagery were a stunning added bonus - great note as well, thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Your poem was written to perfection - well expressed your color scheme and imagery were a stunning added bonus - great note as well, thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
