Comment from AlvinTEthington

Exceptional

A perfect triolet. Excellent execution of iambic pentameter and the difficult repetition and rhyme scheme. (I do wonder why holy is capitalized, but that is an extremely minor concern.) Excellent juxtaposition of picture and poem. One of the best works I have seen from your pen. This would be great for Christian children in Sunday School to memorize this time of year.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009

I never know when to capitalize or not capitalize words that go with the whole God thing - if I didn't capitalize it I'd have five people telling me I should. I honestly don't care one way or the other. LOL Thank you so much, Alvin, for this generous and gracious review. This was the only art I could find on Fan Art that depicts Christmas caroling, so I'm glad you like it! Brooke :-)

reply by AlvinTEthington on 29-Nov-2009

I think either pure and holy should both be capitalized or neither should be capitalized. It's such a minor issue.

Comment from pugdogy

Excellent

excellent work!!! I really enjoyed reading this piece of work. The sentiment behind it was beautiful. the picture you chose fits perfectly. keep up the great work!!!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009

Thank you, pugdogy - I truly appreciate your thoughtful review :-) Brooke

Comment from percival86jack

Excellent

Another glorious poem by Brooke celebrating the upcoming Christmas season. Next to the first day of spring, this is my favorite time of the year!
Smiles from the frozen north... xox
STILL NO SNOW!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009

Thank you, Jack. I love Christmas, and it's a darned good thing I do because it gets me through the first part of winter! :-) Brooke

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Wondrous words of love. I especially liked the artwork; English Christmas scene? I loved your poem. Carol must be a great lady, she is so busy at Christmas. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009

Thank you, Kay. It is art from Fan Art, but I'm sure that is what it is meant to look like. It's the only picture I could find of carolers. Brooke :-) That was a groaner of a joke!!!

Comment from MsRefusenik

Excellent

Very nice! It's funny how you can sing the same old carols year after year, and then one suddenly tunes into your heart and delivers a fresh insight into your brain that makes the words come alive and does send the words "Heavenwards." Then the carol is forever new and meaningful to you after that. An excellent triolet.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009

Thanks so much, Maryellen, and I'm so sorry this reply is so delayed. Brooke :-)

Comment from Joyce L.

Excellent

Brooke, you indeed must already be in the Christmas spirit. The picture and the poem go well together and I can see maybe a Christmas card with this. Use it. = )

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009

Thank you, Joyce. It's Advent, so the Christmas spirit is here for me :-) Brooke

Comment from joan marie

Excellent

We should all send our greetings Heavenward. Every day for that matter. This is a lovely Christmas poem. Simple, yet so profound in its message. joan marie

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009

Thank you, Joan Marie, for your thoughtful response to this Christmas poem :-) Brooke

Comment from Jarlsbane

Excellent

I tip my hat to you... I know I keep saying it but you do such a fantastic job with the triolet. I know my reviews all sound the same when I read your stuff but I have nothing to add that could possibly improve the poems you have been writing. Lovely Brooke, just lovely!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009

Thanks again, Michael - I'm so glad you like my use of the triolet ;-) Brooke

Comment from sgalletti

Excellent

Beautiful triolet Brooke! This poem and its accompanying picture would make a grea Christmas card! Yes--let's all sing the carols praying for peace on earth. Sue

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009

Thank you, Sue - sorry this review got buried - you know I appreciate every comment you make :-) Brooke

Comment from redrider6612

Excellent

Indeed, we should all be mindful of the author of our peace here on earth. Wonderful job on this triolet. I loved the repeating line, it was very well written, and the rhymes were natural. I loved the artwork too. All in all, a wonderful poem for the season. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent.

Hugs,
Diane

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2009

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2009

Thank you, Diane - sorry for the delayed reply on this one - I always appreciate your thoughtful reviews :-) Brooke