POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from Amicus
No mincing of words for you, my friend! Blatant and straight forward pandering might just get you all the votes you need to win this silly contest.
Good entry. Since, I'm one of those poor folks who never know exactly what they want guess I'll just have to settle for your generous funny money pay for read. :>) Thanks.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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No mincing of words for you, my friend! Blatant and straight forward pandering might just get you all the votes you need to win this silly contest.
Good entry. Since, I'm one of those poor folks who never know exactly what they want guess I'll just have to settle for your generous funny money pay for read. :>) Thanks.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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Amicus...Good thing no one knows where to find me...Since everything is said in jest. Thanks for the review. I appreciate it. Crol
Comment from Blue Danube
Begin Again:
Found this haiku to be pretty daring and sort of funny.
I think you are brave for posting this.
I mention this because I'm still sort of shy about certain modes of expressing myself so I get quite amazed when I read other people's writings and what they might be thinking about in order to produce poetry, short story, etc.
Well done.
Blue
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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Begin Again:
Found this haiku to be pretty daring and sort of funny.
I think you are brave for posting this.
I mention this because I'm still sort of shy about certain modes of expressing myself so I get quite amazed when I read other people's writings and what they might be thinking about in order to produce poetry, short story, etc.
Well done.
Blue
Comment Written 22-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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Blue...I would never say this even in jest to someone''s face, but I can put it to paper and smile. Everything is said in jest and writing allows us to escape where we would not normally go. Thanks for the review. Carol
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Begin Again:
Yes, I absolutely got that this is expressed in jest.
I admire you for doing it.
Blue
Comment from KennyRogers
Hi there, begin again, and thanks for the bribe - sounds like there's something for everyone! However, I've had to mark you down on this occasion as you have fifteen syllables instead of the thirteen specified. Something along the lines of -
Ask! You shall receive:
Money, sex, whatever you need.
Best wishes, Kenny
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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Hi there, begin again, and thanks for the bribe - sounds like there's something for everyone! However, I've had to mark you down on this occasion as you have fifteen syllables instead of the thirteen specified. Something along the lines of -
Ask! You shall receive:
Money, sex, whatever you need.
Best wishes, Kenny
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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Kenny..Thanks for bringing that to my attention. I got hung up on how I was saying whatever. Appreciate you helping me out. Carol
Comment from prodigal
LMAO. This is too funny. yepper. I suppose that would get the vote. I love it. I didn't count syllables. I suppose a bribe like that could get you a vote even if the work wasn't complete. Good job and good luck in the contest- Sam
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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LMAO. This is too funny. yepper. I suppose that would get the vote. I love it. I didn't count syllables. I suppose a bribe like that could get you a vote even if the work wasn't complete. Good job and good luck in the contest- Sam
Comment Written 22-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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Sam...I hope everyone knows this was done in jest. A few of my reviews are scaring me a bit. This was totally out of character for me..but what fun is writing if you can't be someone else when you do. Thanks for the review. Carol
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Now I have to read what other's said. LOL.
Comment from Readywriter52
I guess if you can ask for anything you want, you should be able to receive it. I think there are better things in life than money or sex. There are things that can make you happier.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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I guess if you can ask for anything you want, you should be able to receive it. I think there are better things in life than money or sex. There are things that can make you happier.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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ReadyWriter....I so agree with you, but the contest asks for something other than what I would normally write....Just jumped of the deep end and wrote it! Thanks for stopping by.
Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is very cute. Kind of like the old Coffe, Tea, or Me. I'm still amazed how you write something meaningful and cute with such a few words. You're poem has words than we're required to write in a review.
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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This is very cute. Kind of like the old Coffe, Tea, or Me. I'm still amazed how you write something meaningful and cute with such a few words. You're poem has words than we're required to write in a review.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2009
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Barbar...
Thank you for the review. It definitely is out of character for me...but if that's what it takes...just thought I'd jump in with both feet. Thank you again ...Fewer words..I can stay out of that land and any other trouble. lol Carol