CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from FredCollingwood
I love your poem and I've always liked Kurt Wenner's work. I'm amazed at how he uses perspective to create amazing art. This rating is for this and all of the other poems of yours I've enjoyed.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2009
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I love your poem and I've always liked Kurt Wenner's work. I'm amazed at how he uses perspective to create amazing art. This rating is for this and all of the other poems of yours I've enjoyed.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2009
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Fred, it is SO cool to know you like Wenner's work, also!! Talk about bringing people together!! Just jaw-dropping stuff. Thank you so much for this awesome review! Means more than you know. From my heart, Sue :-))
Comment from Minglement
Ah, this is beautifully written and seems to encompass all the arts, including writing. All art, writing included, is so subjective. But we all know what we like, and we are all enriched for the artists sharing. Good luck.
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Ah, this is beautifully written and seems to encompass all the arts, including writing. All art, writing included, is so subjective. But we all know what we like, and we are all enriched for the artists sharing. Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from BethShelby
I love the rhythm in this poem and way you have rhymed it doesn't distract from the meaning. It is a fitting tribute to all artists.
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I love the rhythm in this poem and way you have rhymed it doesn't distract from the meaning. It is a fitting tribute to all artists.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from tom jordan
I concede and want to be the first to congratulate you on winning the contest. I read it once again just now to be sure. Very good.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2009
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I concede and want to be the first to congratulate you on winning the contest. I read it once again just now to be sure. Very good.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2009
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Tom, I was thrilled when I saw the contest you sponsored, for I love the arts, across the board. And to receive your highest rating is such an honor. I am SO happy you liked it that much! Thank you for the contest and your wonderful review. With warmest regards, Sue
Comment from rmdelta
Sue, an excellent writing, my friend, and a great contest entry. Well written and you should really do well in voting during the contest vote. Great work
Reggie
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Sue, an excellent writing, my friend, and a great contest entry. Well written and you should really do well in voting during the contest vote. Great work
Reggie
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from fastdigits
A thought-provoking writing
in a flow of words that chisels
itself into a building block of
thoughts, much like a building
going up, one brick fitting
perfectly into the one next
to it, until a monolithic masterpiece
is built that surpasses all around
it.
The piece of artistry you have written
is akin to that building and will
certainly stand tall and monumental
in this contest.
Well done and good luck
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A thought-provoking writing
in a flow of words that chisels
itself into a building block of
thoughts, much like a building
going up, one brick fitting
perfectly into the one next
to it, until a monolithic masterpiece
is built that surpasses all around
it.
The piece of artistry you have written
is akin to that building and will
certainly stand tall and monumental
in this contest.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from Roisin
A beautiful poem, Sue. Your rhymes are perfect and your meter is great. Your appreciation of art shines through here. You have a great entry for the contests. The picture too, is amazing. Is it not 3D? Good luck in the contest.
Hugs
Roisin
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A beautiful poem, Sue. Your rhymes are perfect and your meter is great. Your appreciation of art shines through here. You have a great entry for the contests. The picture too, is amazing. Is it not 3D? Good luck in the contest.
Hugs
Roisin
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from glacierbabe
Very well done. It certainly fits the parameters of the contest. They rythm and the rhyme is wonderful. I found nothing that needs correction. Best of luck in the contest.
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Very well done. It certainly fits the parameters of the contest. They rythm and the rhyme is wonderful. I found nothing that needs correction. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from Paradox Tremors
A nice bit of writing, and I liked the picture you used with it. There's an artist waiting to get out of each of us, some knows how to let it out better than others. Good luck.
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A nice bit of writing, and I liked the picture you used with it. There's an artist waiting to get out of each of us, some knows how to let it out better than others. Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009
Comment from Jazh
I really enjoyed this beautiful poem, Sue. It speaks eloquently of something we're all familiar with, yet don't often put into words. It flows well, with natural rhymes. I particularly like "common language" - it is; and "change" - one of the greatest forces for change in the world. Good luck with the contest. :)
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I really enjoyed this beautiful poem, Sue. It speaks eloquently of something we're all familiar with, yet don't often put into words. It flows well, with natural rhymes. I particularly like "common language" - it is; and "change" - one of the greatest forces for change in the world. Good luck with the contest. :)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2009