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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Surgeries can be a trial and recovering from them as we age takes longer than usual. I hope you do not have any long term adverse affects. I have read a few people's experiences for this contest and I wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Thanks Dolly, there were a few changes that I made after you . Thank you for the kind words for my health.
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Comment from Douglas Goff
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First of all, good luck! Second, stay positive and you will get through. I'm saying this in the middle of the storm. I just had umbilical surgery yesterday and they put 8 holes in me. I can't move and the pain is horrible. But I shall survive. And so shall you. I will send a prayer up for you. God Bless!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023

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Wonderful presentation. Loved Kenzie's fabulous artwork and that video of Fred Gwynne singing is great. And you, dear Debi, are such a miracle and I'll keep praying that you will be able to walk again! You are so brave and a model of faith!

Typos:
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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
    Hi Hon, I had it taken care of those typos about five minutes ago, but thank you anyway. And I thank you so much for your lovely review and kind words. Yes I am trying to use Kenzie's art a little more again. I appreciate and am so thankful for you and your dear things you have said here and for the prayers. I can walk a little bit but after a few steps it just gets too painful. I know it will be ok, I don't know how it couldn't with all my special friends and prayers.
    Thank you again!
reply by lyenochka on 02-Feb-2023
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I resonated with this one, as just today I was thinking I might forego a shoulder reThe beauty of this poem is how forthcoming you were with what you underwent. It takes a lot to move an optimist to vigilance.

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2023