The Orange
A Fictional tale by Eric C Goose63 total reviews
Comment from palmart
Nice poem to read! I found similarities with real world but you commented that this is totally imaginative, so I assume that it is. Nice and flow rhyming allow reading smoothly and nicely. Drawing is a bit different from what an orange may look like, but imagination is open and can fill the gaps.
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Nice poem to read! I found similarities with real world but you commented that this is totally imaginative, so I assume that it is. Nice and flow rhyming allow reading smoothly and nicely. Drawing is a bit different from what an orange may look like, but imagination is open and can fill the gaps.
Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Yeah most oranges don?t have eyebrows
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Thank you for your sense of humour, Eric!
Have a blessed weekend!
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Jolly 😊
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Cheers!
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Omg, lol. This is the best poem about "fruit" I have ever read. Very creative and entertaining. And your author notes had me laughing so hard... I don't recognize your name but I look forward to reading more of your work. Feel free to stop by and check out my portfolio.
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reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Omg, lol. This is the best poem about "fruit" I have ever read. Very creative and entertaining. And your author notes had me laughing so hard... I don't recognize your name but I look forward to reading more of your work. Feel free to stop by and check out my portfolio.
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Comment Written 28-May-2021
reply by the author on 28-May-2021
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Will do
Comment from Michelle Holliman
I'm sure Don didn't care anything about ruling anyone other than himself.
And a lonely castle seems like an unworthy expense for intending to do good by going to a far-off land to retrieve medicines for his countrymen.
Other than being considered a miserable soul I'm unsure what caused so many people to hate him so much.
I'm pretty sure he tarried during he journey back up North, down South, or West, or East. Regardless, at least he saved his countrymen and women. Who cares if he didn't have the heavy responsibility of leading them to wherever.
I like this riddle, but remember I lack the nurishment to continue for much longer.
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reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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I'm sure Don didn't care anything about ruling anyone other than himself.
And a lonely castle seems like an unworthy expense for intending to do good by going to a far-off land to retrieve medicines for his countrymen.
Other than being considered a miserable soul I'm unsure what caused so many people to hate him so much.
I'm pretty sure he tarried during he journey back up North, down South, or West, or East. Regardless, at least he saved his countrymen and women. Who cares if he didn't have the heavy responsibility of leading them to wherever.
I like this riddle, but remember I lack the nurishment to continue for much longer.
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Comment Written 27-May-2021
reply by the author on 27-May-2021
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😂 now that?s funny
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So a one star means I need many corrections? A lot of errors misspellings and so forth? You failed to point out any? And I?m not sure what you meant by so many people hated him it?s a fictional tale about fruit there are no people involved