October Sun
Remembering autumn76 total reviews
Comment from zanya
This poem is a beautiful serenade to the onset of Autumn /Winter when 'musty leaves swirl down '- what an effective image of the season, both visual and aural in its appeal- the reader can almost hear the blanket of quietude that is descending
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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This poem is a beautiful serenade to the onset of Autumn /Winter when 'musty leaves swirl down '- what an effective image of the season, both visual and aural in its appeal- the reader can almost hear the blanket of quietude that is descending
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you Zanya for your encouraging review and for the extra special shiny stars.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful poem with great imagery and a smooth rhyming pattern. I can almost see the smoky clouds and the snowy owl swooping to grab its prey. The artwork pairs perfectly.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This is a beautiful poem with great imagery and a smooth rhyming pattern. I can almost see the smoky clouds and the snowy owl swooping to grab its prey. The artwork pairs perfectly.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you Lorraine for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello JMF4119,
Nice piece of poetry having lucid as well as PERFECTLY matching the theme phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting the worth enjoying scene of October Sun / Month.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Hello JMF4119,
Nice piece of poetry having lucid as well as PERFECTLY matching the theme phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and TRANSPARENTLY depicting the worth enjoying scene of October Sun / Month.
The last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review and for the extra special stars. I appreciate your thoughts and for sharing your favorite part.
Blessings
Janet
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Janet, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Mastery
Hi Janet. So is this not a revived from Fanstory? It is beautiful. I remember when October was a month to look forward to before all this pandemic business. The skies are gorgeous, aren't they
Love these lines, my friend:
"Dusk settles in as stars shine in the Milky Way.
The rising harvest moon adds brilliance to the sight.
A snowy owl swoops low to grab its evening prey --
reverberating echoes on the edge of night."
Blessings Jan. Bob
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Hi Janet. So is this not a revived from Fanstory? It is beautiful. I remember when October was a month to look forward to before all this pandemic business. The skies are gorgeous, aren't they
Love these lines, my friend:
"Dusk settles in as stars shine in the Milky Way.
The rising harvest moon adds brilliance to the sight.
A snowy owl swoops low to grab its evening prey --
reverberating echoes on the edge of night."
Blessings Jan. Bob
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you Bob for your thoughtful encouraging review and for sharing the lines your love.
Blessings and stay well my friend.
Janet
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You too Jan. X Bob
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
This is a very excellent poem about Fall; it opines the season's dark, scary, haunting, colorful qualities.
Bare trees and the barren ground. Yet, one gets hope of a rebirth when Spring arrives with a flair. I'm glad your poem gives us hope of better days, when nature's colors are light and pastel.
Great work.
Have a wonderful weekend,
Blessings, Cindy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This is a very excellent poem about Fall; it opines the season's dark, scary, haunting, colorful qualities.
Bare trees and the barren ground. Yet, one gets hope of a rebirth when Spring arrives with a flair. I'm glad your poem gives us hope of better days, when nature's colors are light and pastel.
Great work.
Have a wonderful weekend,
Blessings, Cindy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you Cindy for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Lance S. Loria
This just proves you've been a great poet for many years! What a beautifully written and nicely flowing poem. The descriptive words which tie so nicely with the accompanying artwork just carry the reader along on a brief journey. Very nicely done. No edits or adjustments.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This just proves you've been a great poet for many years! What a beautifully written and nicely flowing poem. The descriptive words which tie so nicely with the accompanying artwork just carry the reader along on a brief journey. Very nicely done. No edits or adjustments.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Hi Lance.
I have been writing for several years but I?ve been having a bit of a dry spell.
Thank you for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from l.raven
Hi Janet, so good to see you my sweet friend...I wish I had a six for you******...you would have it...this is just beautiful...it was good to read something with flair of Springtime in it...as I look out the window at 6-7 inches of snow...and are expecting another 3-6 inches this weekend...LOL...
I love your words sweet girl...brilliant in description...
so very nicely written...and your picture...is stunning...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Hi Janet, so good to see you my sweet friend...I wish I had a six for you******...you would have it...this is just beautiful...it was good to read something with flair of Springtime in it...as I look out the window at 6-7 inches of snow...and are expecting another 3-6 inches this weekend...LOL...
I love your words sweet girl...brilliant in description...
so very nicely written...and your picture...is stunning...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you Linda for your thoughtful and encouraging review. Just knowing you thought it was worthy of a six is a delight for me.
We had a dusting of snow a few days ago but where I'm from in PA - they had the 6-7 inches like you had.
Blessings and stay well.
Janet
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Your so welcome sweet girl...
we are getting ready for 6-10 inches tomorrow
OK I love snow...but I will concede to...we've had enough...LOL...Blessings to you as well...and you stay safe...love xxoo
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
You certainly have a way with words. Your sterling poem about October rings all the right bells. So well composed and full of excellent imagery.
Too bad it's not entered in a contest as it feels like a winner.
Ralf
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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You certainly have a way with words. Your sterling poem about October rings all the right bells. So well composed and full of excellent imagery.
Too bad it's not entered in a contest as it feels like a winner.
Ralf
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you Ralf for the encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem is beautiful in topic and words. There is great imagery with good rhymes and flow. I love autumn. I could see everything you wrote on this rainy day.
Thanks for haring.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Your poem is beautiful in topic and words. There is great imagery with good rhymes and flow. I love autumn. I could see everything you wrote on this rainy day.
Thanks for haring.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you Jan for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello JMF4119,
This is a lovely October/Autumn poem of that season beauty. I like how you shared the Autumn time is a little slowing of nature as it prepares for the next season, Spring. Nicely written. I am glad you found this poem you wrote in the past to bring for us to enjoy. I enjoyed reading it. I made me appreciate the season of Autumn. Nicely written. Great rhyming scheme and flow of your words.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Hello JMF4119,
This is a lovely October/Autumn poem of that season beauty. I like how you shared the Autumn time is a little slowing of nature as it prepares for the next season, Spring. Nicely written. I am glad you found this poem you wrote in the past to bring for us to enjoy. I enjoyed reading it. I made me appreciate the season of Autumn. Nicely written. Great rhyming scheme and flow of your words.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you Joyce for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
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You are welcome.