Rain, Rain Go Away
A day from rain to clear skies75 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You have used the
required words very well.
-She was very busy
sipping soda, running in the rain,
blinded by lightning!
-I am glad she had a
relaxing evening looking at the stars.
-Well done; good luck.
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-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You have used the
required words very well.
-She was very busy
sipping soda, running in the rain,
blinded by lightning!
-I am glad she had a
relaxing evening looking at the stars.
-Well done; good luck.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from Ben Colder
I can see this happening. So typical for the worker in the city. I find nothing wrong with this write and think it will be a good entry. Thanks for sharing your talent. Hope you win.
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I can see this happening. So typical for the worker in the city. I find nothing wrong with this write and think it will be a good entry. Thanks for sharing your talent. Hope you win.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from DeboraDyess
Excellent use of the words required! It was a fun free verse read, thank you. IYou did a great job painting a picture of the rainstorm and the clearing sky full of stars.
Best in the contest!
Blessings,
Deb
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Excellent use of the words required! It was a fun free verse read, thank you. IYou did a great job painting a picture of the rainstorm and the clearing sky full of stars.
Best in the contest!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! I like your poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. Excellent work! I like your poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from June Sargent
You've succeeded in creating a piece that not only includes all the necessary words - but it made sense! Sometime poems can feel and sound awkward and contrived in these types of contests. I enjoyed the read and am glad she survived her daunting day...
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You've succeeded in creating a piece that not only includes all the necessary words - but it made sense! Sometime poems can feel and sound awkward and contrived in these types of contests. I enjoyed the read and am glad she survived her daunting day...
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from Ann Market
I enjoyed reading this poem! Personally, I think you incorporated the words for the contest entry very well. I liked the possible metaphor of the woman running through the storm and finally coming out at the end, except the "storm" was a period in her life.
Good luck to you in the contest! :)
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I enjoyed reading this poem! Personally, I think you incorporated the words for the contest entry very well. I liked the possible metaphor of the woman running through the storm and finally coming out at the end, except the "storm" was a period in her life.
Good luck to you in the contest! :)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a good job using the required words in your poem. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I really like the art you paired with your entry. Good job with alliteration of b, s, e, & d. Your poem tells a good little story.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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You did a good job using the required words in your poem. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I really like the art you paired with your entry. Good job with alliteration of b, s, e, & d. Your poem tells a good little story.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from Janet Foor
Excellent artwork to compliment your poem. I think you completed the requirements perfectly. Nice use of alliteration and internal rhyme.
Very nicely done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
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Excellent artwork to compliment your poem. I think you completed the requirements perfectly. Nice use of alliteration and internal rhyme.
Very nicely done and good luck.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from Leann DS
Hey there. This is pretty cute. Because it was a daunting day, could she spill her soda instead of sipping it? And also, I think you meant to say lightning rather than lighting. Or, maybe I'm wrong. :-) well done, and good luck in the contest. Hugs.
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Hey there. This is pretty cute. Because it was a daunting day, could she spill her soda instead of sipping it? And also, I think you meant to say lightning rather than lighting. Or, maybe I'm wrong. :-) well done, and good luck in the contest. Hugs.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem with the prescribed words painting a picture of unending rain on a rainy day, rushing for it to go away and come back another day.
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A very well-written poem with the prescribed words painting a picture of unending rain on a rainy day, rushing for it to go away and come back another day.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021