Chip's Poetry
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Comment from Blue Hendrix
Great job!loved tge imagery the rhymes and the words you chose to paint a very vivid picture. I also liked the picture you used it added a nice touch and pulled it all together.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Great job!loved tge imagery the rhymes and the words you chose to paint a very vivid picture. I also liked the picture you used it added a nice touch and pulled it all together.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Blue!
Comment from James Orton
A great short poem to send a very powerful and encouraging message with a very apt choice of illustration to go with it. You are also right in the sense that overcoming a dear can make you feel so free again . Feeling free often has connotations with how dancers feel when they perform.so q superb choice of words there too . Very well written within a very specific structure
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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A great short poem to send a very powerful and encouraging message with a very apt choice of illustration to go with it. You are also right in the sense that overcoming a dear can make you feel so free again . Feeling free often has connotations with how dancers feel when they perform.so q superb choice of words there too . Very well written within a very specific structure
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thanks, James!
Comment from Sugarray77
Good job, Chip, on this short, but meaningful verse for the Four Line Poem contest. Your choice for the photograph shares the freedom that one feels as we read this verse. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Good job, Chip, on this short, but meaningful verse for the Four Line Poem contest. Your choice for the photograph shares the freedom that one feels as we read this verse. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Melissa!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
What a perfect "Fight Song" this is!! Very inspirational and wise. No wonder it was awarded an All-Time Best seal! I couldn't agree more. xo
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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What a perfect "Fight Song" this is!! Very inspirational and wise. No wonder it was awarded an All-Time Best seal! I couldn't agree more. xo
Comment Written 04-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2019
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Many thanks, Rachelle!
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Absolutely my pleasure, Chip. xo
Comment from Diana L Crawford
There is so much wisdom in so few words! This is a poem that encourages and dares one to shed the negative and embrace the positive and take the risk to really live not just existš???š?„°
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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There is so much wisdom in so few words! This is a poem that encourages and dares one to shed the negative and embrace the positive and take the risk to really live not just existš???š?„°
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Diana!
Comment from Ben Colder
An interesting four line poem. The meaning is well intended for fear. I see nothing wrong. The rules are met and the contest should appreciate these strong words.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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An interesting four line poem. The meaning is well intended for fear. I see nothing wrong. The rules are met and the contest should appreciate these strong words.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks, Ben.
Comment from phil nelson
perfect! you not only nailed the requirement but stayed on point and expressed your message so well! This was very enjoyable and is a winner in my book!
All the Best!
Phil
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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perfect! you not only nailed the requirement but stayed on point and expressed your message so well! This was very enjoyable and is a winner in my book!
All the Best!
Phil
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks for the kind words and generous rating, Phil!
Comment from Liberty Justice
Hey what a great moving testimonial to one's dreams and how we should not allow our fears to keep us from climbing to the top of our desires and making something good out of ourselves. Read Review mine, also. lolol liberty justice
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Hey what a great moving testimonial to one's dreams and how we should not allow our fears to keep us from climbing to the top of our desires and making something good out of ourselves. Read Review mine, also. lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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I will, LJ, thanks!
Comment from robyn corum
Chip,
I like poems that SAY something. All too often, people write just to write - and the things they produce don't always have a real message or meaning to them. (I can't say much, though, because invariably, my own messages are rather stupid. haha)
The point is -- I liked this. It's smart and unique and well-presented. I would have appreciated a bit larger font - but I suppose that's personal preference and you don't have to make your posts for old folks like me. ha
So, thanks - I enjoyed!
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Chip,
I like poems that SAY something. All too often, people write just to write - and the things they produce don't always have a real message or meaning to them. (I can't say much, though, because invariably, my own messages are rather stupid. haha)
The point is -- I liked this. It's smart and unique and well-presented. I would have appreciated a bit larger font - but I suppose that's personal preference and you don't have to make your posts for old folks like me. ha
So, thanks - I enjoyed!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Robyn. I have had others suggest a larger font, so probably something I should consider!!
Comment from juliaSjames
This is a great poem. Vivid images enlarge it beyond its restricted format.
As you say in your author notes, fear can confine one in a self imposed comfort zone. Breaking free isn't easy but its necessary for development.
If the contest hasn't been decided yet, I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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This is a great poem. Vivid images enlarge it beyond its restricted format.
As you say in your author notes, fear can confine one in a self imposed comfort zone. Breaking free isn't easy but its necessary for development.
If the contest hasn't been decided yet, I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Julia!
