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the sparrow

51 total reviews 
Comment from Kathleen Washnis
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Very deep and very sweet; the sparrow is an overlooked bird yet so special. I like how it started with can you take these tears from my eyes? We all need to take the wings we've been given and try to fly again, innocent and grin and put the past behind us! Nice thoughtful poem.

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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
    Thank you.