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Comment from Earl Corp
I think if you bold the first word in each line it would make it easier to see the acrostic element to your poem. Part of the problem is I'm reading this on an iPhone and it's all squished together. Good luck in the contest.
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I think if you bold the first word in each line it would make it easier to see the acrostic element to your poem. Part of the problem is I'm reading this on an iPhone and it's all squished together. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Hitcher
Many have claimed to have see and converse with God over the centuries but I believe few if any since Christ's death have. To say you have though, proclaim you have...well that always seams to be the beginning of a new religion, sect/cult/ whatever they decide they are going to be.
I do not have the answers to God, His word, His expectations of us I just hope and pray that He is. A thought provoking poem which should garner many an interesting review.
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Many have claimed to have see and converse with God over the centuries but I believe few if any since Christ's death have. To say you have though, proclaim you have...well that always seams to be the beginning of a new religion, sect/cult/ whatever they decide they are going to be.
I do not have the answers to God, His word, His expectations of us I just hope and pray that He is. A thought provoking poem which should garner many an interesting review.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Ogden
This work is very difficult to review, largely because the first three stanzas pertain to various points of view, that would necessitate individual consideration.
As to the rest, briefly, I like your belief that God is all-powerful, able to do "everything for everyone," and your views on His manifold powers.
Good luck with this entry in the acrostic free verse competition, Alcreator Litt Dear,
Ogden (Don)
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This work is very difficult to review, largely because the first three stanzas pertain to various points of view, that would necessitate individual consideration.
As to the rest, briefly, I like your belief that God is all-powerful, able to do "everything for everyone," and your views on His manifold powers.
Good luck with this entry in the acrostic free verse competition, Alcreator Litt Dear,
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi there is a lot to be answered here. A great many will answer or try to but will they be correct. There are thousands of responses here, but still they may not be justifiable answers. We talk and talk and talk. Some to win fafame, others to will name. Selfishness.
So I do not think I am proficient to read Gods mind. But there is justice here and there are s love as in his sacrificing his Son to the cross.
Hundred of Saints are here to show us the truth about him.
But we are too quick to judge. Pride gain!
Benny
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Hi there is a lot to be answered here. A great many will answer or try to but will they be correct. There are thousands of responses here, but still they may not be justifiable answers. We talk and talk and talk. Some to win fafame, others to will name. Selfishness.
So I do not think I am proficient to read Gods mind. But there is justice here and there are s love as in his sacrificing his Son to the cross.
Hundred of Saints are here to show us the truth about him.
But we are too quick to judge. Pride gain!
Benny
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Sanku
God is invisible to some men but visible to some." i would like to think that god is invisible to all of us .That is why we revere him .we made him in our mould but actually we have no ideawhat really God is.
you must have taken a lot of trouble to wrote this long poem.
your faith comes out clear.
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God is invisible to some men but visible to some." i would like to think that god is invisible to all of us .That is why we revere him .we made him in our mould but actually we have no ideawhat really God is.
you must have taken a lot of trouble to wrote this long poem.
your faith comes out clear.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Habib Oke
Great poem! In deed you are different, yes, in the best way. Your writing style is unique. It's portray the way you think and how you think brilliantly. Great job AlCreator -- keep it up..
But this contest looks look the other contest on "Use God" 22 times. Was it it like that or it's just a branch of the same contest?
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Great poem! In deed you are different, yes, in the best way. Your writing style is unique. It's portray the way you think and how you think brilliantly. Great job AlCreator -- keep it up..
But this contest looks look the other contest on "Use God" 22 times. Was it it like that or it's just a branch of the same contest?
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from lyenochka
A very good spiritual meditation DR! I think that it's so important to be praying and keep talking to the Lord. Also, we can grow in wisdom if we meditate on His Words. I like how you question why He appears to just a few but He knows all of us intimately. You conclude with real faith in God's omniscience and trust in His perfect plan.
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A very good spiritual meditation DR! I think that it's so important to be praying and keep talking to the Lord. Also, we can grow in wisdom if we meditate on His Words. I like how you question why He appears to just a few but He knows all of us intimately. You conclude with real faith in God's omniscience and trust in His perfect plan.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Patty Palmer
Right on!! I k!now that God knows everything and His plan is in place! He knows those that don't know him from Adam (sorry for the pun. I just couldn't help myself) He even knows how many hairs are on each of our heads! Our God is an awesome God!
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Right on!! I k!now that God knows everything and His plan is in place! He knows those that don't know him from Adam (sorry for the pun. I just couldn't help myself) He even knows how many hairs are on each of our heads! Our God is an awesome God!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Kamisah Karim
I love this poem of yours.Good questions put forth in order to stir up thoughts in my brain.It is in need of an exercise.
People do those unspeakable things you mentioned, disrespecting God.Scolded God for so many things but I guess God has gotten used to these ranting by the very beings He created.After all, God was the one who gave us our human traits. Good or bad but we chose the ones that we wish to practice in our lives.
I bet you that God is enjoying Himself listening to all those bad words said about him from his own creation.A source of humour even..Thats why God never thought of changing his plan of execution. Where would he get his source of fun then?
Thank you for sharing and a very good luck to you in the contest.
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I love this poem of yours.Good questions put forth in order to stir up thoughts in my brain.It is in need of an exercise.
People do those unspeakable things you mentioned, disrespecting God.Scolded God for so many things but I guess God has gotten used to these ranting by the very beings He created.After all, God was the one who gave us our human traits. Good or bad but we chose the ones that we wish to practice in our lives.
I bet you that God is enjoying Himself listening to all those bad words said about him from his own creation.A source of humour even..Thats why God never thought of changing his plan of execution. Where would he get his source of fun then?
Thank you for sharing and a very good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
In the body of the poem you make a statement about man condemning and criticizing God I was reminded of Romans 3:4. "...Let God be true and every man a liar." And when men question God I am reminded of the book of Job when God asked Job, "where were you when I laid the earth's foundation?"
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In the body of the poem you make a statement about man condemning and criticizing God I was reminded of Romans 3:4. "...Let God be true and every man a liar." And when men question God I am reminded of the book of Job when God asked Job, "where were you when I laid the earth's foundation?"
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019