God Speaks
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Comment from royowen
A beautifully written acrostic that sums up how man both relates to God and the rest of the world. Learning how to love by soaking in God's word, and living out the work of the tasks assigned by God, well done, good effort, good luck, blessings, Roy
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A beautifully written acrostic that sums up how man both relates to God and the rest of the world. Learning how to love by soaking in God's word, and living out the work of the tasks assigned by God, well done, good effort, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
Comment from Janet Foor
An interesting and thought provoking acrostic with lots of rules. You seem to have accomplished each rule perfectly. Using any word 22 times is quite an accomplishment.
Well done and good luck.
blessings
Janet
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An interesting and thought provoking acrostic with lots of rules. You seem to have accomplished each rule perfectly. Using any word 22 times is quite an accomplishment.
Well done and good luck.
blessings
Janet
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
Comment from karenina
There is something intriguing about the strict format of an Acrostic teamed with the flowing, unencumbered style of free-verse! The rules make this a real challenge and yet you managed to pull it off and come up with a cohesive and soul-filled poem. Nice work!--Karenina
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There is something intriguing about the strict format of an Acrostic teamed with the flowing, unencumbered style of free-verse! The rules make this a real challenge and yet you managed to pull it off and come up with a cohesive and soul-filled poem. Nice work!--Karenina
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Great job. Your poems are always so uplifting and spiritual. They never have a negative word in them I find that very comforting. I enjoy reading your work thanks for sharing.
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Great job. Your poems are always so uplifting and spiritual. They never have a negative word in them I find that very comforting. I enjoy reading your work thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
Comment from Ben Colder
This poem grant the reader how to rise above the trials of life. Those who are led by the spirit are the sons of God. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you and best in the contest.
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This poem grant the reader how to rise above the trials of life. Those who are led by the spirit are the sons of God. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you and best in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding entry here for the contest and any other place you post this, Creator. Your words are so inspiring:
Especially here:
"Understanding God is not enough; help us live mortally immortal
Show us good living as God likes, irrespective of our creed or faith
Thank you for sharing. Bless you, Bob
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Outstanding entry here for the contest and any other place you post this, Creator. Your words are so inspiring:
Especially here:
"Understanding God is not enough; help us live mortally immortal
Show us good living as God likes, irrespective of our creed or faith
Thank you for sharing. Bless you, Bob
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
Comment from estory
You had a good flow here, and a nice music built up in the language as you rolled along. There were lots of good echoing effects in repeating words and phrases. You also seem to hold us up to the light in this one, exposing our selfishness to the purity of what God intends for us here. It shows how much we've strayed. estory
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You had a good flow here, and a nice music built up in the language as you rolled along. There were lots of good echoing effects in repeating words and phrases. You also seem to hold us up to the light in this one, exposing our selfishness to the purity of what God intends for us here. It shows how much we've strayed. estory
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
Comment from rjuselius
this is an interesting format dear alcreator and I think you have written to the point that reflects your relationship with God. Very well shared. everyone should take the word of God as the ethical and spiritual way to live even if you don't believe.
thank you dear friend for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
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this is an interesting format dear alcreator and I think you have written to the point that reflects your relationship with God. Very well shared. everyone should take the word of God as the ethical and spiritual way to live even if you don't believe.
thank you dear friend for sharing!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a very elaborate acrostic with a very powerful message. God tells us how to behave and what to do, he guides us on this temporary home.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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This is a very elaborate acrostic with a very powerful message. God tells us how to behave and what to do, he guides us on this temporary home.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Look for, and freely go on to walk and talk with God this day
Know the alphas, words, lessons and teach us living on this earth...this is very meaningful to me. You put so much into your spiritual poems and they are deeply moving I enjoyed lack of punctuation no need of that here stream of consciousness felt in this excellent work God bless you and well done Meai :)
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Look for, and freely go on to walk and talk with God this day
Know the alphas, words, lessons and teach us living on this earth...this is very meaningful to me. You put so much into your spiritual poems and they are deeply moving I enjoyed lack of punctuation no need of that here stream of consciousness felt in this excellent work God bless you and well done Meai :)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
