God Speaks
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Comment from Ulla
Well, I have to say, that it is the best poem I've yet read off your hand. To be honest your words don't make a lot of sense most of the times, but this one did. It's very well written. I'm not religious but that's beside the point/ Very well written Acrostic. All the best. Ulla:))
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Well, I have to say, that it is the best poem I've yet read off your hand. To be honest your words don't make a lot of sense most of the times, but this one did. It's very well written. I'm not religious but that's beside the point/ Very well written Acrostic. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from patcelaw
Al, this is a lovely free verse acrostic. As you continue to walk with God, He promises to go with you and help you along the way. May your week be blessed with all good things. Patricia
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Al, this is a lovely free verse acrostic. As you continue to walk with God, He promises to go with you and help you along the way. May your week be blessed with all good things. Patricia
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from A. Willow Bends
If this is your first acrostic, you did a very admirable job! It is done with creativity and flow, the artwork accompanies beautifully to perfection. Your words are reassuring and inspirational. Great job!
Wendy
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If this is your first acrostic, you did a very admirable job! It is done with creativity and flow, the artwork accompanies beautifully to perfection. Your words are reassuring and inspirational. Great job!
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from Poetic Friend
This is a very inspirational poem, one that should be read daily as a reminder that the Heavenly Father is always with us.
The lack of punctuation works well with this poem given it was written in acrostic form. The lines possibly could be shorter, but they did not distract from the read.
Thank you for sharing.
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This is a very inspirational poem, one that should be read daily as a reminder that the Heavenly Father is always with us.
The lack of punctuation works well with this poem given it was written in acrostic form. The lines possibly could be shorter, but they did not distract from the read.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from lyenochka
That's the best way to live - to walk with God and learn from Him. And with Him as our Guide, we can live well on Earth and be blessed to know Him better in Heaven.
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That's the best way to live - to walk with God and learn from Him. And with Him as our Guide, we can live well on Earth and be blessed to know Him better in Heaven.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from kleck140
You clearly state the importance of
a relationship with God is to us. You truly write from
your heart. I am glad I stopped by. Thanks for sharing.
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You clearly state the importance of
a relationship with God is to us. You truly write from
your heart. I am glad I stopped by. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
Comment from gramag4
Very nicely done... and the message is beautiful. It quickly captures and shares your faith. What a perfect picture to accompany it. Thanks for sharing. Great job!
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Very nicely done... and the message is beautiful. It quickly captures and shares your faith. What a perfect picture to accompany it. Thanks for sharing. Great job!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I didn't notice it was an acrostic at first, and that in my opinion is great. I love acrostics especially if you want to write but can't get started. It almost gives you a structure and somewhere to start. Enjoy your walk and I hope many walk with you
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I didn't notice it was an acrostic at first, and that in my opinion is great. I love acrostics especially if you want to write but can't get started. It almost gives you a structure and somewhere to start. Enjoy your walk and I hope many walk with you
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
Comment from Joe Grace II
Wonderful Free Verse Poetry. I didn't notice it was acrostic til afterwards, making it that much more meaningful and beautiful.
All kinds of wisdom contained within about how to live the way God created us for...for a purpose beyond ourselves and finite goals and plans and desires.
Blessings,
Joe
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Wonderful Free Verse Poetry. I didn't notice it was acrostic til afterwards, making it that much more meaningful and beautiful.
All kinds of wisdom contained within about how to live the way God created us for...for a purpose beyond ourselves and finite goals and plans and desires.
Blessings,
Joe
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
For you first acrostic, and your first free verse poem, you have combined them and come up with a really lovely spiritual poem, written in your own inimitable style. It's a pleasure to read such well written words, that show us your passion and emotion in walking with God. So beautiful, my friend, Well done. :)) Sandra xx
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For you first acrostic, and your first free verse poem, you have combined them and come up with a really lovely spiritual poem, written in your own inimitable style. It's a pleasure to read such well written words, that show us your passion and emotion in walking with God. So beautiful, my friend, Well done. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
