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Comment from Donka Kristeva
Food for deep thought. Getting trapped by visitors of the night can be fatal. A powerful message and a warning against erroneous paths.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Food for deep thought. Getting trapped by visitors of the night can be fatal. A powerful message and a warning against erroneous paths.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Thanks for reviewing. Your comments are appreciated -- Craig
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written sonnet about the spider's mission to spin his web and catch as many insects as he can. Sometimes we are caught in a web of lies and love that we need to escape from, if we can.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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A very well-written sonnet about the spider's mission to spin his web and catch as many insects as he can. Sometimes we are caught in a web of lies and love that we need to escape from, if we can.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Thanks very much, Sandra. I'm most grateful for your kind review -- cheers, Craig
Comment from dmt1967
This poem made me smile. It was very creepy and I felt my skin crawl. I hate spiders so, the picture just added to the terror lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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This poem made me smile. It was very creepy and I felt my skin crawl. I hate spiders so, the picture just added to the terror lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Spiders are misunderstood ;-) Many thanks for the kind review; cheers, Craig
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We are all ensnared to some extent by life's tempting gems. I enjoyed your sonnet about the fate of the fly or moth to the spider! I wish you luck with the sonnet contest, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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We are all ensnared to some extent by life's tempting gems. I enjoyed your sonnet about the fate of the fly or moth to the spider! I wish you luck with the sonnet contest, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Thanks, Dolly. Much appreciation, as always. Craig
Comment from Scarbrems
Well, this is an impressive use of metaphor, Craig. A fine sonnet.
'Why is it that we seldom can foretell
the sad conclusion of our errant ways?'
This is a very true statement. I also wonder why it is that we never listen to anyone who can, and does foretell it.
A good one, should do well in the contest.
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Well, this is an impressive use of metaphor, Craig. A fine sonnet.
'Why is it that we seldom can foretell
the sad conclusion of our errant ways?'
This is a very true statement. I also wonder why it is that we never listen to anyone who can, and does foretell it.
A good one, should do well in the contest.
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
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Excellent question, Emma. Wish I had an answer. I also wish I'd listened a bit more. Thanks so much, Craig