Paper Dolls and Toy Soldiers
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Comment from Sally Law
This is outstanding! So sweet with the imagination of a young boy playing soldier. I can visualize the "Ford Gremlin" with the shout-out windows. Quite possibly the world's ugliest car. Right up there with the "Volkswagen Thing." I enjoyed this very much.
All my best,
Sally
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This is outstanding! So sweet with the imagination of a young boy playing soldier. I can visualize the "Ford Gremlin" with the shout-out windows. Quite possibly the world's ugliest car. Right up there with the "Volkswagen Thing." I enjoyed this very much.
All my best,
Sally
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
WELL isn't this just too cute, Mav. Nothing like a camo outfit to make a young fella feel like he's in the army again. I still like camouflage but have never been in the military.
A fun free verse and times are exciting when the imagination gets rolling.
Much enjoyed this. :)
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WELL isn't this just too cute, Mav. Nothing like a camo outfit to make a young fella feel like he's in the army again. I still like camouflage but have never been in the military.
A fun free verse and times are exciting when the imagination gets rolling.
Much enjoyed this. :)
ange
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2019