For God!
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "For God Live Righteously"Dedicated, Thanks to God, God's Appreciation
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Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Be a 'doer', not just a 'talker'. Show respect for both humans and nature. Do it for all the right reasons. Practice it and don't just speak it. I really, really like this!
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Be a 'doer', not just a 'talker'. Show respect for both humans and nature. Do it for all the right reasons. Practice it and don't just speak it. I really, really like this!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
Comment from meeshu
I really like this one Alcreator. wonderful language and phrasing without a lot of fluff. a very direct piece that is written in run-on form, perfect for the message...............meeshu
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I really like this one Alcreator. wonderful language and phrasing without a lot of fluff. a very direct piece that is written in run-on form, perfect for the message...............meeshu
Comment Written 15-Aug-2018
Comment from fm wright
I like everything you had to say in this piece because if we really understood what God is about then more of us would follow your words. I could find nothing wrong in any way in this bit of prose.
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I like everything you had to say in this piece because if we really understood what God is about then more of us would follow your words. I could find nothing wrong in any way in this bit of prose.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
Comment from trailblazer101
show examples of earthly living, inspire man, cause no suffering to man, incur no loss of human and natural resources, use gifts of Nature properly.
That is profound stuff again. It disturbs me to see out resources ripped off and out of the ground by the present generation as though they want to reap everything in one lifespan and no thought to the next.
Covered well by you in a few words.
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show examples of earthly living, inspire man, cause no suffering to man, incur no loss of human and natural resources, use gifts of Nature properly.
That is profound stuff again. It disturbs me to see out resources ripped off and out of the ground by the present generation as though they want to reap everything in one lifespan and no thought to the next.
Covered well by you in a few words.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2018
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, educational, this post teaches others a better way to live, on
reflection this is a good thing, a lot of people self harm by doing the wrong thing...this is a good example to follow, it can saves a person from pain and suffering, to focus on good things in life, good guidance.
Good Luck!
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Good read, educational, this post teaches others a better way to live, on
reflection this is a good thing, a lot of people self harm by doing the wrong thing...this is a good example to follow, it can saves a person from pain and suffering, to focus on good things in life, good guidance.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Merajul
Good words of wisdom. The pic is rightly conveying the message :
Show examples prove you are fit for living on this earth
Short but to the point. All the best.
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Good words of wisdom. The pic is rightly conveying the message :
Show examples prove you are fit for living on this earth
Short but to the point. All the best.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from zlp22
Very good advise. A higher power is there to help you,but if you do not believe you will be on your own. Living a good and fruitful life will help in the afterlife. No one knows what will happen after death,so be good while you are alive.
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Very good advise. A higher power is there to help you,but if you do not believe you will be on your own. Living a good and fruitful life will help in the afterlife. No one knows what will happen after death,so be good while you are alive.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from LIJ Red
I did not count the words, looks like about sixty. The Bible says in a number of places, by their fruits ye shall know them. Talk is cheap. I think you hit the prompt squarely. Excellent.
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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I did not count the words, looks like about sixty. The Bible says in a number of places, by their fruits ye shall know them. Talk is cheap. I think you hit the prompt squarely. Excellent.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 12-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review I appreciate.
Comment from KL Williams
Your writing speaks of much truth. We can't just talk about what we should do, we should do it! Be Christ-like and love one another, and take care of this beautiful planet He gave us. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
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Your writing speaks of much truth. We can't just talk about what we should do, we should do it! Be Christ-like and love one another, and take care of this beautiful planet He gave us. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 11-Aug-2018
Comment from Cedar
You have made a strong statement with your entry into this contest. Your entry seems to meet all the requirements for this contest. I wish you good luck...Bill
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You have made a strong statement with your entry into this contest. Your entry seems to meet all the requirements for this contest. I wish you good luck...Bill
Comment Written 10-Aug-2018