Her Lover is Lost to Her At Sea
A Ditty: Every Night She Keeps Watch for Her Captain54 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked the line, 'nailing drapery over her reality', very expressive with a nostelgic feel to it. Waiting for someone who may not return is such a heartache, I enjoyed your atmospheric write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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I liked the line, 'nailing drapery over her reality', very expressive with a nostelgic feel to it. Waiting for someone who may not return is such a heartache, I enjoyed your atmospheric write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Hey Dolly:
Thanks so much for the constellation bestowed... I'm honored and humbled. Yours, diana
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the life of a sailor's wife. She will always be second in line, the ocean is his first love and often takes his life while the waiting at the shore waits in vain.
typo
Her heart[s]gives up
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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A very well-written poem about the life of a sailor's wife. She will always be second in line, the ocean is his first love and often takes his life while the waiting at the shore waits in vain.
typo
Her heart[s]gives up
Comment Written 18-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Hi Sandra:
Thanks for the correction... Much appreciated. Thanks so much for the constellation bestowed... I'm honored and humbled. Yours, diana
Comment from donette1914
This feels like a movie. outstanding!! Sad ending he never returns again.
It was a pleasure to read your outstanding work and it was truly well penned
donette1914 july 18 2018
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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This feels like a movie. outstanding!! Sad ending he never returns again.
It was a pleasure to read your outstanding work and it was truly well penned
donette1914 july 18 2018
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Hey Donette:
Thanks so much for the constellation bestowed... I'm honored and humbled. Yours, diana
Comment from Sugarray77
This is a sad and poignant verse. In your description, her waiting hope crumbles before our eyes and the final veil of sadness consumes. Very well done and the artwork is good too.
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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This is a sad and poignant verse. In your description, her waiting hope crumbles before our eyes and the final veil of sadness consumes. Very well done and the artwork is good too.
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Comment Written 18-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2018
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Hey Sugarray:
Thanks so much for the constellation bestowed... I'm honored and humbled. Yours, diana