Everything Is Going To Be Alright
Tears are a blessing from our bodies78 total reviews
Comment from Dorinda Palmisano
What a wonderful line, caress and release.... This is a really comforting poem and the illustration is great. Is it your work? Thank you for this Dorinda
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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What a wonderful line, caress and release.... This is a really comforting poem and the illustration is great. Is it your work? Thank you for this Dorinda
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hey Dorinda... Nice compliment Dorinda... it is a lovely drawing. I design Movie Posters... a different medium but would love to play with this style.. thanks so much for reading and your stellar review. yours, dianaxo
Comment from Kerry Foley
This is a nice four line poem entry, my friend. A great description of tears. There's always a great relief to have a good cry every now and then:)) Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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This is a nice four line poem entry, my friend. A great description of tears. There's always a great relief to have a good cry every now and then:)) Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hi Kerry... thanks for those supportive thoughts... and your stellar review and last but not least... your thoughtful words. yours, diana
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My pleasure, Diana.
Comment from rjuselius
Indeed, tears bring a sense of cleansing dear Diane! I don't cry often but when I do, I feel so much better after.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Indeed, tears bring a sense of cleansing dear Diane! I don't cry often but when I do, I feel so much better after.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hey Rebekka... I keep trying to type your name and it corrects to Rebecca... life's little frustrations. Thanks kiddo... I don't cry easily and like you I do feel better when I do.
Comment from Mastery
Hi, author. (your name please?) LOL.
"Caress and release
Painful"
It's your use of srong verbs ha make this poery come alive. Good job. Blessings, Bob
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Hi, author. (your name please?) LOL.
"Caress and release
Painful"
It's your use of srong verbs ha make this poery come alive. Good job. Blessings, Bob
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hi Mastery... I am a firm believer in strong words verb, adjective and on. thanks for seeing that yours, diana
Comment from Pantygynt
On balance I think I prefer your four liner as a reason for tears being shed over the more scientific definitions involving dopamine. That last line, the nine syllable one is a perfect reason for crying, not that we need a logical reason for tears -- they just happen.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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On balance I think I prefer your four liner as a reason for tears being shed over the more scientific definitions involving dopamine. That last line, the nine syllable one is a perfect reason for crying, not that we need a logical reason for tears -- they just happen.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hey Pantygynt... thanks for your fruitful suggestion... I changed the scientific still reason for crying. Thanks for the help. yours, diana
Comment from Harry Smith
The poem speaks such truth and is a very powerful poem that has lots and lots of imagery and emotions. The picture selection is perfect for the poem.
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The poem speaks such truth and is a very powerful poem that has lots and lots of imagery and emotions. The picture selection is perfect for the poem.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Thanks Harry for your stellar review and your thoughtful thoughts. I can be redundant in a review. yours, diana
Comment from R Lakshmi prabha
Excellent four line poem.Tears release pain and rivers of color give sweet relief.
The painting matched the poem very well. It's as if you painted the picture for your poem. Best of luck.
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Excellent four line poem.Tears release pain and rivers of color give sweet relief.
The painting matched the poem very well. It's as if you painted the picture for your poem. Best of luck.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hey Lakshmi... thanks so much for stopping and reading and the stellar review. yours, diana
Comment from Waishali Deshmukh
You have done a great job with this short poem. Healthy mind paves the way for happy life. Very well said. Everything is going to be alright. Good luck. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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You have done a great job with this short poem. Healthy mind paves the way for happy life. Very well said. Everything is going to be alright. Good luck. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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I love your analysis of the and I agree wholeheartedly. Yours, diana
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Artasylum,
Lovely piece of poetry meeting the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme; Impressive and matching the theme phraseology; Smooth, musical and enchanting flow.
Best of Luck!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hello Artasylum,
Lovely piece of poetry meeting the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme; Impressive and matching the theme phraseology; Smooth, musical and enchanting flow.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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I love this review... It is soooooo very poetic and musical itself. thanks for the stellar review RP... yours, diana
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Diana, Most Welcome!
Wishing you a pleasant weekend,
~ RP
Comment from Savita George
Could not agree more with you. Very well written . Deep emotions have been expressed using minimum language Tears are friends not enemies
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Could not agree more with you. Very well written . Deep emotions have been expressed using minimum language Tears are friends not enemies
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2018
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Hey Savita... thanks, I guess?
