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Ashes in the Wind

Short poem contest entry

51 total reviews 
Comment from Pamusart
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This is a good entry for the contest. I agree with you about man's footprints being the footprints of doom. I had several oppurtunities to go to Honolulu. I did not go because I read that tourists were stressful to native wildlife. Thank you for sharing

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 Comment Written 11-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2018
    Hello Pamusart!
    So pleased you enjoyed my verse.
    Thank you for your thoughtful and complimentary review!

    diane