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Comment from Dean Kuch
Hello, oh verbose one. It's me coming once again to pester you with one of my righteous reviews. I'll probably never know if you've read it or not because you NEVER RESPOND. But I'm going to write it just the same ... if it's all the same to you.
A "Thanks, "D", would be sufficient. You know, just to let me know you really give a sh!t? That my opinions are at least registered and received, if not appreciated?
It's the very least you could do...
Okay. Enough about that.
I believe I know for whom this is written. The first letter of her name comes between F and H in the alphabet.
It seems as if everyone is falling (or has fallen) in love here on good old FanStory.
That's nice.
I'm glad to see that someone here inspires you to do something.
Think she'll give it a six?
I can almost guarantee you with certainly that one named "nordicgirl" will.
And if I'm right, so will the other member in question.
This poetic proclamation professing your love has your tell-tale characteristics of presentation and eloquent wording plastered all over it.
Nicely done.
Now if you'll excuse me, I must move along to readers and reviewers who actually reply, at least once in awhile.
Well done, Michael.
~Dean
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Hello, oh verbose one. It's me coming once again to pester you with one of my righteous reviews. I'll probably never know if you've read it or not because you NEVER RESPOND. But I'm going to write it just the same ... if it's all the same to you.
A "Thanks, "D", would be sufficient. You know, just to let me know you really give a sh!t? That my opinions are at least registered and received, if not appreciated?
It's the very least you could do...
Okay. Enough about that.
I believe I know for whom this is written. The first letter of her name comes between F and H in the alphabet.
It seems as if everyone is falling (or has fallen) in love here on good old FanStory.
That's nice.
I'm glad to see that someone here inspires you to do something.
Think she'll give it a six?
I can almost guarantee you with certainly that one named "nordicgirl" will.
And if I'm right, so will the other member in question.
This poetic proclamation professing your love has your tell-tale characteristics of presentation and eloquent wording plastered all over it.
Nicely done.
Now if you'll excuse me, I must move along to readers and reviewers who actually reply, at least once in awhile.
Well done, Michael.
~Dean
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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I'm pretty sure I replied not toooooo long ago. I do read and appreciate your reviews and I'm especially thinking of one I'm MEANING to reply to from a couple weeks ago that was very humbling and awesome actually. I have no excuse other than I just am not here. Everyone is dying at home and now there isn't enough to pay rent, so I'm occupied. But still, I'm just unhappy with the place really and trying to talk myself out of it. NG is an old friend from high school. Yep, she ALMOST always gives me a six, deservedly so. Not sure who you think this is for. I'm not getting any action at all. Maybe I should leave the house. :)) mike
P.S. When is the haiku club going to get rolling again?
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See? I knew you could do it if I goaded you into it a bit, Mike, LOL.
As to who this was written for, I have my suspicions. But, they're just that--my suspicions,nothing more.
As far as when the haiku club starts meeting again, It will be in September for voting on entries for book two. That's when I expect Gypsy to start issuing challenges for the new book.
What she's doing now, the challenges she is currently posting every Sunday in the forum--those are just for practice and aren't eligible for inclusion in the book.
Thanks for touching base with me. I seriously appreciate it.
~Dean
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The funny thing is, I just wouldn't feel right saying only "Thanks, Dean" or the same to anyone. Of course, that really is better than nothing. LOL
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That's fine by me, really, Mike
Happens all the time and I'm okay with that.
At least I know you received my review.
Try me, you'll see. :)
Comment from Lulube
A very heartfelt, straight to the point, and honest out pore of your feelings. Now, there may be "that one you have never met" but have had written communications with, or it may be "that one you have never met but wish to meet one such as you think about", either way, you touched me, the reader of this poem, to want to be honored that one would write such tender words from the heart for me. Not saying that I'm waiting for a poem, lol, just put me in the dream of things. lol
This did the trick, hope it gets you the response you want.
lulube
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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A very heartfelt, straight to the point, and honest out pore of your feelings. Now, there may be "that one you have never met" but have had written communications with, or it may be "that one you have never met but wish to meet one such as you think about", either way, you touched me, the reader of this poem, to want to be honored that one would write such tender words from the heart for me. Not saying that I'm waiting for a poem, lol, just put me in the dream of things. lol
This did the trick, hope it gets you the response you want.
lulube
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Gee, that is as lovely a review as I've ever received. Yes, this is beyond any response I could imagine. I'm so delighted you like this and totally "got it". Thanks a million. Well, getting sleepy now. It's dream time. BUCKLE UP!!!! :)) mike
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lol welcome and so nice to hear words of passion and sincerity from a man.
lulube
Comment from nordicgirl
Holy moly. This is ... wow, this is just amazing. It has been forever since you have written the hell out of something. Gee whiz, I am blushing, but I LOVE this. NG
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Holy moly. This is ... wow, this is just amazing. It has been forever since you have written the hell out of something. Gee whiz, I am blushing, but I LOVE this. NG
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017