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Bits and pieces of my life for my grandchildren
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Comment from
Ricky1024
"Too lose a son is Heart breaking and a father never gets over it...
"I know I lost my eighteen year old in 2003 from a car accident.
'Today, I'm still healing but better then the wife,
"She's up there with Him.
"This was a sad write to create as well as review."
"My blessings to the family...
Ricky1024.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
Thank you for the heartfelt review. My prayers go out to you as they go out to my brother each and every day,
~patty~
reply by Ricky1024 on 28-Jun-2017
And my deepest condolences...
Ricky and Family
Comment from
c_lucas
The only thought I have is why did the chaperones failed to check out the ski path before allowing the students to use it? This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
Hi; there was a lot of discussion about the chaperones and the things they failed to do. Darrell had only been on skis one other time before this trip, and the trail he was on was marked as 'intermediate.' My brother and his wife chose NOT to sue the school or the chaperones because nothing would bring my nephew back.
Thank you for your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
reply by c_lucas on 28-Jun-2017
Monday quarter-backing never work.
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