Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Really enjoyed this wonderfully funny poem, which flowed effortlessly,
lovely rhythm and rhyme throughout with some wonderful satire lines within.
I particularly enjoyed the last stanza which completed this excellent poem tremendously well.
Mitchell

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

This was a fun write. He's so much fun to make fun of. So glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Lena Borghi

Excellent

Bravo for writing this currently very relevant piece full of great metaphors. You've made good use of poetic devices such as assonance and consonance and alliteration and your rhymes are solid. I like the play on words on your description above the title.

Best,
Lena

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

Thanks. It was fun making fun of him. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

And unfortunately he's not supporting climate change, so bye bye humped backed whale! Your poem is a glimpse of the true feelings and opinions of the American public, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

I thought poking some fun at him would give people a laugh. I'm surprised how seriously reviewers are taking this. Thanks for your input.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

I guess there could be a Donald Dick connection here. That would make a lot of sense. I liked your poem and think, if whales could talk (or read) this one would think things are "Bad", "The greatest ever seen" or "A disaster"

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Comment from MaggieF

Excellent

Great picture. Ha ha, this made me laugh. Hope this site isn't being monitored. Great rhythm and rhyme made your poem flow well with good alliteration. Enjoyed. MaggieF

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

Just having a bit of fun. Glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

In spite of your disclaimer at the end, I think you did a wonderful job of portraying life in America. We are saddled with this contemptuous man and now we have to deal with the fallout.

Thank you for your candid poem,
~patty~

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 Comment Written 02-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2017

It was fun making fun of him. Glad you enjoyed my poem.