Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Dreamplay"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from DR DIP
You know i really admire poets that can write these it is very effective. Great image to accompany your write. The font color maybe slightly hard to read just an opinion
dip
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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You know i really admire poets that can write these it is very effective. Great image to accompany your write. The font color maybe slightly hard to read just an opinion
dip
Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Hi, dip! How're you doing?
Listen, I really appreciate your review and am happy that you liked the image. I've changed the font to a blue color. Please let me know if this is not a better combination, willya?
always,
jeni
Comment from sandy montgomery
These are difficult to write. It takes much thought to make them work. Here you have achieved a fantastical delight forward and backwards. It not only makes sense but flows easily from line to line. A fine achievement. Thank you for sharing your work.
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These are difficult to write. It takes much thought to make them work. Here you have achieved a fantastical delight forward and backwards. It not only makes sense but flows easily from line to line. A fine achievement. Thank you for sharing your work.
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Dear sandy,
Difficult, yes, but fun! I love writing these and am tickled pink that you thought this a "fantastical delight forward and backwards!"
Thank YOU for reading and reviewing my work.
love,
jeni
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Luna,
I enjoyed your palindrome. The art is perfect for it. You did a great job with the style. Your words do red the same front/back. Good job with their selection. I like the 'whimsicality' of this. It would have made a great entry in the palindrome contest for later this year.
Good job & thanks for sharing. I see no errors. Jan
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Luna,
I enjoyed your palindrome. The art is perfect for it. You did a great job with the style. Your words do red the same front/back. Good job with their selection. I like the 'whimsicality' of this. It would have made a great entry in the palindrome contest for later this year.
Good job & thanks for sharing. I see no errors. Jan
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2017
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Dear Jan,
I'm glad you enjoyed this palindrome. I liked the art as well. Thanks for your read and complimentary review.
Be well,
luna
