Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Words upon Words"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from Pantygynt
I hate these things -- not yours particularly just the idea in principle. Most of them do not do what they say they do -- read the same. The example is a case in point. Life imitates nature is not the same statement as nature imitates life.
To be fair yours does not fall into that trap the nearest to an inexactitude that yours comes to is in the phrases,
"Mother moon heeds life dream/dream life heeds moon mother"
It all lies in the nature of the verb.
John heeds Mary is not the same as Mary heeds John
but
John and Mary sing tunefully is the same as tunefully sing Mary and John.
I have been told I am wrong on this criticism many times but I remain intransigently yours. Lol.
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I hate these things -- not yours particularly just the idea in principle. Most of them do not do what they say they do -- read the same. The example is a case in point. Life imitates nature is not the same statement as nature imitates life.
To be fair yours does not fall into that trap the nearest to an inexactitude that yours comes to is in the phrases,
"Mother moon heeds life dream/dream life heeds moon mother"
It all lies in the nature of the verb.
John heeds Mary is not the same as Mary heeds John
but
John and Mary sing tunefully is the same as tunefully sing Mary and John.
I have been told I am wrong on this criticism many times but I remain intransigently yours. Lol.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was very creative. I could picture the children giggling and playing. The imagery of your poem was wonderful. Great job I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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I thought this was very creative. I could picture the children giggling and playing. The imagery of your poem was wonderful. Great job I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!
luna
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh I love it. It is perfect back and forth and so well don't it flows and reads differently both ways.
Very nicely done, this looks like it took a long time. I have done two and that was twotoo many
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Oh I love it. It is perfect back and forth and so well don't it flows and reads differently both ways.
Very nicely done, this looks like it took a long time. I have done two and that was twotoo many
Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!
luna
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Palindrome that are making sense both ways. That is the point of a good Palindrome in my opinion. Your turning word play was an excellent choice.
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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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A very well-written Palindrome that are making sense both ways. That is the point of a good Palindrome in my opinion. Your turning word play was an excellent choice.
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2016
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Thanks so much for reading my work and for this review. I appreciate your attention to my work and I apologize for not replying sooner!
luna
