Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Fanciful and lighthearted, you transform us into a magical land where we can imagine fairies and other folk making nature grow. It's a wonderful poem for all ages.

On the other side, I am so sorry you've been gone and that you experienced the tragedy you did. These are difficult times for young folk, and for those who try to care for them.

Thanks for the beautiful poem,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2016

Thank you very much for your kind condolences.

I'm sorry this reply to your kind review is so late. I've just returned from Philadelphia dealing with the loss of my dear sister-in-law. I hope you understand.

Again, thank you for the review!

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Nice sonnet that brings to mind fairies dancing in a forest glen to lure and hypnotize a human so he/she can be kidnapped to the Land of Faerie.

These flowers look like fairies in a way. We all hope fairy magic can heal the wounds of nature.

Keep writing

dragonpoet




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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

dragonpoet,

Thanks so much for your kind words. I appreciate you sharing with me the images it invoked in your imagination. I will seek out your work and read it. Again, many thanks.

Yours,

The Moonchild (Jeni)

reply by dragonpoet on 16-Nov-2016

You're welcome. I will welcome you to my page. Thanks in advance.

Joan

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

I love this rhyming form and the artwork you chose your poetic descriptions complete the image. Thanks for sharing this piece.

Wishing you all the best...
Bill

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Thank you, Bill! I'm happy that you, too enjoy this form. I find it delightful. I appreciate your kind words, and will try to seek out your writing.

Cheers,

The Moonchild (Jeni)

Comment from Asyraf N. Jamsari

Exceptional

I am very captivated by the artwork in the first place. But as I read through, it feels so soothing. The presentation, the colour and everything is so nicely shown. I adore the choice of words. Also the rhyme is so well thought. I wish you all the best for the contest as well as in everything you do. Keep posting beautiful poems as I really am looking forward for them.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016

Thank you, dear Asyraf, for the delightful six-star review. I am honored. I appreciate your kind words, and will seek out your work to read.

Always,

The Moonchild (Jeni)