Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

I like this. I, too communicate much better through ink than in person. It gives us time to think through what we want to say and how we want to say it. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

exactly!! thank you debbie :-)

Comment from LisaD123

Excellent

This is an entertaining and original example of this poetic form. The statement is very well-chosen and the questions flow perfectly from it. Good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

thank you lisa :-)

Comment from johnwilson

Excellent

I congratulate anyone who can write something with these restrictions; having said that I enjoyed the questions you asked the "unconscious consciousness" of the world.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

hehe thank you john :-)

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

I can, and that's the true art of our craft. Can we get our meaning across with our turns and twists of language? Can we write something that captures attention, and imparts an important message?
Great message in your short poem, my friend!
Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda

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 Comment Written 05-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2016

so true! thank you rhonda :-)