Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. I reckon your poem meets the criteria for this contest. It is certainly simple and easy to read and understand. What more can be said about it? Good work.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Hi, there from Montague! Thank you and Welcome aboard Fanstory (belated as it is) I generally don't do poetry, but thism was so easy. I write novels and I would be honored were another fellow Michigander to become a fan of moine. I plan to become a fan of yours immediately so I won't miss your furhter postings. Good Luck (My current chapter is worth 1.18 for about one more hour then it goes to 2 cents)

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

God blessed you with the knowledge
I thought you did a wonderful job
My kind sir I don't think there any with a pen you can"t conquer.
Cookie

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Awww. What a sweetheart you really are, M'lady. Blessings. Bob

Comment from Rookette

Excellent

This was fun to read. A like that it's out of your comfort zone. I looked at this contest and finally admitted defeat. I couldn't come up with anything! Great work :) xoLeslie

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Thanks so much, Leslie. I appreciate this. LOL...Bob

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Bob ...

= LOL ... interestingly enough, the prompt is such that the entries I've read so far are far from making me yawn!
= Yours is is cool. Excellent entry.
= What the hell, good luck in the contest! (*<*)

* A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside Down! *
Jacqueline M Franklin (*_*)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Thanks so much, Jax. Bob

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

LOL this is a bit different for you, but I like your message - "so what the hell". This was a fun one to read - especially coming fro you. Have a good day, Mastery


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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Thanks so much, Doug. Btw. My chapter is still offering 1.18 until this afternoon around 3pm. LOL...Bob

reply by Douglas Paul on 10-Apr-2016

I will try to take a look at that

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016

Thanks so much, Bob