Comment from Gypsymooncat

Excellent

Goodness, this is one complex form of Rondeau. I also love the Rondeau form and may have a go at it myself. But this one? I don't think I'd have the patience for it! I think you kicked it, and loved the atmosphere of this. It was darkly, ironically light-hearted to this Aussie girl hiding from 40+ temps today, and I enjoyed it, both for technicality and content. Great job!
Cheers
Chris
xoxoxoxoxoxoxx

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2016

Thanks, Chris - glad you enjoyed this.

It's something I would never have attempted a couple of years ago, but I now have the confidence to tackle just about anything. Let's see what frontiers I can conquer this year.

Keep cool.

Steve

Comment from His Grayness

Excellent

Very well done and much appreciated for this truly unique and arcane style so perfectly presented. The wisdom contained is certainly comprehensive and real and the awareness is well defined. Many thanks for a fine read! HIS GRAYNESS

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2016

Thanks, HG

I appreciate the kind words.

Steve

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Photo is out of this world. Poet is so fascinated with how many ways there are to die. He describes ways in detailed in a humorous
witty type of way. liberty justice

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2016

Thanks, LJ

Steve