Comment from teols2016

Exceptional

You make poetry writing look easy. I especially like the first stanza...very descriptive. If you have more like this, a book of poetry would do well for you.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015

thanks so much my friend

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

I hope your date works out well. I have only bad luck with online dating, so I stay away from that kind of dating. I am sure she will like this beautiful poem as well.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015

she has already heard it and it brought her to tears i understand about your experience unless there is connection on a deep level before meeting i dont meet

Comment from judester

Excellent

I am so happy for you. Isn't it wonderful to find someone to share romance and your poetry. Nothing like a new romance to make us feel alive, cheers judester

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015

thank you so much

Comment from charmaineccloete

Exceptional

Wow I hope when I start writing longer poems and romantic stories I would be able to convey my emotions this clear. I loved it.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015

thank you so much for the six stars and the nice words you are awesome

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very nice, It's sweet, well written. thanks for sharing this. Hope you had a wonderful Christmas and enjoy a Happy New Year.

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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2015

thank you william