Comment from
Teri7
This is a very good contest entry you have penned. You used such vivid imagery words. It makes me so thankful that I have never tried that stuff. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
Thank you for taking the time to review the poem. the poem was fun to write but the subject is deadly serious. have a merry Christmas and a good night :-))
Comment from
HKay71
This poem is like reading a adrenaline rush! Powerful and thought provoking, it captures readers at the first word and doesn't let go. No need for improvement it's perfect as is. Thank you for sharing it.
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
Thank you for taking the time to review the poem. the poem was fun to write but the subject is deadly serious. have a merry Christmas and a good night :-))