2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "5/7/5 (beautiful moonlight)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from OLA THOMAS
Beautiful artwork to cruise home your theme. Your choice of soft words like "beautiful moonlight,' 'blue water' and 'funny phases' are soft phrases that makes this poem soothing.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Beautiful artwork to cruise home your theme. Your choice of soft words like "beautiful moonlight,' 'blue water' and 'funny phases' are soft phrases that makes this poem soothing.
ola thomas
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Thank you Ola :)
Comment from rmj09
This poem meets the 5-7-5.
The poem focus the moonlight.
The poem story line development, beautiful moonlight, reflects blue water, funny phases.
The emotion felt optimism of another beautiful night.
The rhythm is strong and carries the reader from word to word.
The layout gives us natural pause to take in the meaning.
A beautiful simple poem.
Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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This poem meets the 5-7-5.
The poem focus the moonlight.
The poem story line development, beautiful moonlight, reflects blue water, funny phases.
The emotion felt optimism of another beautiful night.
The rhythm is strong and carries the reader from word to word.
The layout gives us natural pause to take in the meaning.
A beautiful simple poem.
Keep on writing.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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thank you rmj09 :)
Comment from royowen
Refraction is an amazing thing in an amazing creation that speaks on collective miracle. Nicely presented and designed 5/7/5 entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Refraction is an amazing thing in an amazing creation that speaks on collective miracle. Nicely presented and designed 5/7/5 entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Thank you Roy :)
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Most welcome
Comment from Nosha17
Nice imagery and good message. Moon does have many phases, hopefully not too many funny ones. Well chosen words and lovely picture. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Nice imagery and good message. Moon does have many phases, hopefully not too many funny ones. Well chosen words and lovely picture. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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thank you Faye :)
Comment from rspoet
This is a very fine poem for the contest
It has exact syllables
Excellent imagery and connection
An excellent "reflective" line
Good play on words in the "phases"
Very good picture to poem match
and good choice of night background
with light for a font
Well done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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This is a very fine poem for the contest
It has exact syllables
Excellent imagery and connection
An excellent "reflective" line
Good play on words in the "phases"
Very good picture to poem match
and good choice of night background
with light for a font
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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thank you rspoet :)
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Nice 5-7-5. You say so much with writing so little. I like the play on words with"phases". I wish you luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Nice 5-7-5. You say so much with writing so little. I like the play on words with"phases". I wish you luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 17-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Thank you Christof :)