2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "1/6/1 (Blue)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from ciliverde
Short and to the point. I like it but I wonder if you could think of anything besides "true" for the last line. I can't think of anything myself. I think this form of poetry is very difficult. I do enjoy your little animation of the ocean which is a nice touch.
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Short and to the point. I like it but I wonder if you could think of anything besides "true" for the last line. I can't think of anything myself. I think this form of poetry is very difficult. I do enjoy your little animation of the ocean which is a nice touch.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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thanks
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is a lovely presentation of the 1-6-1 syllable poem, and the poem itself meets the criteria of the prompt as to form, rhyme and syllable count. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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This is a lovely presentation of the 1-6-1 syllable poem, and the poem itself meets the criteria of the prompt as to form, rhyme and syllable count. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you Jeanie :)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
the picture was so beautiful, I didn't want to stop looking at it to begin the poem, you did an excellent job writing this 1 6 1 poem about your favorite color. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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the picture was so beautiful, I didn't want to stop looking at it to begin the poem, you did an excellent job writing this 1 6 1 poem about your favorite color. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you SWJ :)
Comment from Writeronboard
This is really good. Blue is my favorite color, too. And the moving artwork is beautiful. The syllables are correct for this contest so I wish you luck!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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This is really good. Blue is my favorite color, too. And the moving artwork is beautiful. The syllables are correct for this contest so I wish you luck!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you WOB :)
Comment from rspoet
This is an easy poem to review
The rhymes are true
The syllables too
A royal color of blue
Add some graphics
and a perfect picture
It's all there
doesn't need comments from me
except, well done
Good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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This is an easy poem to review
The rhymes are true
The syllables too
A royal color of blue
Add some graphics
and a perfect picture
It's all there
doesn't need comments from me
except, well done
Good luck in the contest
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you rspoet :)