2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "haiku (widow devours him)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A good play on the, "Lady in Red." She is scary, she is predatory and she is vastly desirable. Just the worst kind!
The poem is flawless and well presented.
Rhonda
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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A good play on the, "Lady in Red." She is scary, she is predatory and she is vastly desirable. Just the worst kind!
The poem is flawless and well presented.
Rhonda
Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thank you Rhonda, I appreciate your review. :)
Comment from Chunger
Great poem. It is very vivid for being so short. It paints a very clear picture but also leaves room for so many possibilities. This would make a great opening/subject to a longer story/poem as well. Great Haiku.
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Great poem. It is very vivid for being so short. It paints a very clear picture but also leaves room for so many possibilities. This would make a great opening/subject to a longer story/poem as well. Great Haiku.
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2015
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Thank you Chunger, I appreciate your review. :)