Anxiety
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Comment from TAB_that's me
Worry and anxiety do us no good except affect our health and mental health. I do it too though. We need to learn to have no fears and give it all over to God. Thanks for sharing your thoughts in the poem.
Teresa
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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Worry and anxiety do us no good except affect our health and mental health. I do it too though. We need to learn to have no fears and give it all over to God. Thanks for sharing your thoughts in the poem.
Teresa
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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Theresa: well spoken. Thanks for reading. Linda
Comment from TPAC
Poet starts work to me under decision of course,
having many avenues to explore, writer eventual finds path and accelerate in it taking reader on smoother ride, poet has great talent and presentation which captures reader thoughts and interest
my suggestion for opening more personal
A wave that surfers desire
A wave to me of anxiety
My awakening each morning
I boat captain have to brace
My feelings held for extreme terror
maybe not writer selected course path,
but I feel works as well
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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Poet starts work to me under decision of course,
having many avenues to explore, writer eventual finds path and accelerate in it taking reader on smoother ride, poet has great talent and presentation which captures reader thoughts and interest
my suggestion for opening more personal
A wave that surfers desire
A wave to me of anxiety
My awakening each morning
I boat captain have to brace
My feelings held for extreme terror
maybe not writer selected course path,
but I feel works as well
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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TPAC: thank you for reading. There is no problem with my first stanza. In fact, mine reads much more smoothly and is easier to understand than the one you suggest. Perhaps you might spend more time on improving your own work and quit telling me how to write. Again, this is not a review. You sound like you are attempting to be a great teacher but I learn nothing from you and suggest you do not rewrite any more of my poems. livelylinda
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Wasn't trying to put down, mine wasn't perceived as ownership but boom, my mistake, and yes you are right, my work does lack much
Comment from daycee1
when I read the title I felt a wave of recognition. I read it and saw the picture and felt they went well with the theme. It was really interesting how you put them together, good job!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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when I read the title I felt a wave of recognition. I read it and saw the picture and felt they went well with the theme. It was really interesting how you put them together, good job!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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Thanks for reading and commenting. livelylinda
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Your welcome!
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Livelylinda, wow, that is a fast paced read and as that was your intention you nailed it mate. This is such a well written and thought out piece and I enjoyed and admired it very much. That is life today my friend isn't it. I'm trying to slow down but it never seems to work. Great work my friend, cheers Fez
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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G'day Livelylinda, wow, that is a fast paced read and as that was your intention you nailed it mate. This is such a well written and thought out piece and I enjoyed and admired it very much. That is life today my friend isn't it. I'm trying to slow down but it never seems to work. Great work my friend, cheers Fez
Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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Fez: thanks for reading. I'm glad you noticed the fast pace . . . I used that to make readers feel the anxiety of which I was talking. Linda
Comment from Ben Colder
These attacks are serious enough that some Doctors subscribe medication and you are hooked for life. Interesting poem. Makes sense to me. Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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These attacks are serious enough that some Doctors subscribe medication and you are hooked for life. Interesting poem. Makes sense to me. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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Thank you, Ben. There are pros and cons about every medication and we have to make informed judgments on them. I just deal with the anxiety and have learned some ways to lessen it. My heart can't take that stress! Thanks for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from lalajovanoski
I absolutely love your well written poem. You are very talented and I can honestly relate to this.
You are very talented.
Thank you so very much for sharing this I truly enjoyed reading this!
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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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I absolutely love your well written poem. You are very talented and I can honestly relate to this.
You are very talented.
Thank you so very much for sharing this I truly enjoyed reading this!
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Comment Written 15-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2015
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lalajovanoski: thank you for reading and responding. Cruise through this site; there is a place which describes how to write reviews which might be helpful to you. livelylinda
