The Conjurer
Be careful what you ask for.51 total reviews
Comment from Stacia Ann
Comment Not Available
This comment was written by the instructor for students private review. It is only available to the student.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2015
  |
Comment Not Available
This comment was written by the instructor for students private review. It is only available to the student.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2015
-
Hi, Stacia.
As always, this is a superb edit with excellent suggestions and insights. Working with you has had such a great influence on how I approach my writing :) Everything you've suggested will tighten the story and de-confuse (hehe) the reader. Thanks so much for the encouragement. 'See' you Friday night.
-
:)