Fate
Brats and bullies do change in time.52 total reviews
Comment from rhonny
Another very good 'nonet' poem. You kept within the syllable count and also produced a word-picture that holds a good image for us.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Another very good 'nonet' poem. You kept within the syllable count and also produced a word-picture that holds a good image for us.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks for the inspiring review, and the five stars. God bless.
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Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an excellent poem., The author paints a vivid picture ion the mind of the reader. I particularly like the last line.
as they tallied figures
an inventory
of victory,
destiny
in God's
hands.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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This is an excellent poem., The author paints a vivid picture ion the mind of the reader. I particularly like the last line.
as they tallied figures
an inventory
of victory,
destiny
in God's
hands.
Well done.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
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Thanks for considering it excellent, God bless.
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My pleasure.