And then there's Grace
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Harvest"A collection of Spirtual poems
75 total reviews
Comment from Zue65
The message echoes sweetly in every lines with use of lilting words although I find it difficult to read because of the yellow background and the letters are almost not visible to the eyes, I continued to read even if I had to strain my eyes. Yes, when we are weary and our burdens are too heavy our only solace is God, just like the harvest of grains which signals the end and rest of toils on the farm or the fruits of toils so to speak.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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The message echoes sweetly in every lines with use of lilting words although I find it difficult to read because of the yellow background and the letters are almost not visible to the eyes, I continued to read even if I had to strain my eyes. Yes, when we are weary and our burdens are too heavy our only solace is God, just like the harvest of grains which signals the end and rest of toils on the farm or the fruits of toils so to speak.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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I will deepen the color, that for pointing that out. I am so glad you continued on, I hope it didn't hurt your eyes to much. Thank you for your wonderful review. Carolyn
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
A few lines are not 14 beats but they do not detract from the spiritual flavor of the piece. The usual biblical references are in place and the Christian theme of salvation (the harvest) and its attendant analogy is well presented.
Regards:
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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A few lines are not 14 beats but they do not detract from the spiritual flavor of the piece. The usual biblical references are in place and the Christian theme of salvation (the harvest) and its attendant analogy is well presented.
Regards:
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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I appreciate your insightful review, Thank you, Carolyn
Comment from Suzie Q
Very well said! Appropriate title and good presentation as well. I especially liked " Each soul will bloom and multiply, to bring more to His side. As ever we press forward and in His will abide, Do we share the love He gave and let all know it's free, Or do we keep it to ourselves and hoard for you and me" Great point, great job!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Very well said! Appropriate title and good presentation as well. I especially liked " Each soul will bloom and multiply, to bring more to His side. As ever we press forward and in His will abide, Do we share the love He gave and let all know it's free, Or do we keep it to ourselves and hoard for you and me" Great point, great job!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Your comments are appreciated, thanks for liking this one. Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
A very nice poem alliterating to God's time of Harvest. We should all be trying to help harvest His lambs. Many of us don't, sad to say. I enjoyed reading this and good luck. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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A very nice poem alliterating to God's time of Harvest. We should all be trying to help harvest His lambs. Many of us don't, sad to say. I enjoyed reading this and good luck. Miss Sally
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Thanks Miss Sally, I am happy you enjoyed this one. Carolyn
Comment from bossladyone
I like it. The poem flows nicely and is well written. The picture and color scheme add to the impact of the pome giving greater meaning. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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I like it. The poem flows nicely and is well written. The picture and color scheme add to the impact of the pome giving greater meaning. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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And thank you for reading and commenting. Carolyn
Comment from kiwijenny
Oh I wish I had a six for this, I love your faith portrayed in such a sunlit way...Sonlit way. Yes there are many rooms .you are helping fill them
God bless and thank you
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Oh I wish I had a six for this, I love your faith portrayed in such a sunlit way...Sonlit way. Yes there are many rooms .you are helping fill them
God bless and thank you
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Bless you back and thank you for enjoying this. (thanks for the six stars, I will count it in my heart :-) Carolyn
Comment from Darkhorse555
in the lords light the harvest flourishes and grows with the love in his beauty in the color of the sun this piece shines beautiful
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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in the lords light the harvest flourishes and grows with the love in his beauty in the color of the sun this piece shines beautiful
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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I appreciate your kind review. I am glad you liked it. Carolyn
Comment from NicciFaye
This zealous write has prompt my next piece for my book of poems...you know a lot of people can't even fathom the greatest of a NEW HEAVEN an EARTH....the glory of God and how beautiful the HARVEST will be...how much will be available to all...everything in abundance...this is a spiritual awakening piece...Thank you for writing and sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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This zealous write has prompt my next piece for my book of poems...you know a lot of people can't even fathom the greatest of a NEW HEAVEN an EARTH....the glory of God and how beautiful the HARVEST will be...how much will be available to all...everything in abundance...this is a spiritual awakening piece...Thank you for writing and sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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I enjoyed reading your comments about the poem. :-) Thank you, Carolyn
Comment from Gianinas
It is comforting to envision our lost ones residing by His side.
"Is the Harvest just for us, to enjoy and consume
Not so my friends, in Heavens house, we are told are many rooms."
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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It is comforting to envision our lost ones residing by His side.
"Is the Harvest just for us, to enjoy and consume
Not so my friends, in Heavens house, we are told are many rooms."
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Thank you for the wonderful comments. Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
This is a great poem and written very well. I love the rhyming in couplets too. You did a wonderful job in writing it.
I hope you have a wonderful day!
Kat
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Hi Carolyn,
This is a great poem and written very well. I love the rhyming in couplets too. You did a wonderful job in writing it.
I hope you have a wonderful day!
Kat
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Thank you Kat, I always appreciate your review. I hope you have had a wonderful day too. Carolyn