All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Song for Rose"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Mrs Jones
This is beautifully written. What a lovely thing to have done for her. So much compassion and understanding in the verse.
Well done
Cheers
Rose
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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This is beautifully written. What a lovely thing to have done for her. So much compassion and understanding in the verse.
Well done
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Bless you my dear - thank you so much for reading, understanding, and for your lovely six! :)Sharyn
Comment from Darkhorse555
as the rose found depth in ones soul in the seasons of years as you sang its lament to sleep with new beginnings a lovely piece god bless
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as the rose found depth in ones soul in the seasons of years as you sang its lament to sleep with new beginnings a lovely piece god bless
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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And God bless you back Dh! Thank you - :)Sharyn
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
simple, yet beautifully worded, Sharyn,
and just the right balance.
thank you for sharing and good luck!
warmly, xxx, eph.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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simple, yet beautifully worded, Sharyn,
and just the right balance.
thank you for sharing and good luck!
warmly, xxx, eph.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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thx eph! :)S
Comment from kiwijenny
You are precious. This is a sweet sweet poem. God bless you for this.
I like the picture. I love the last line. I am part Maori where the spiral or koru depicts life and eternity
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You are precious. This is a sweet sweet poem. God bless you for this.
I like the picture. I love the last line. I am part Maori where the spiral or koru depicts life and eternity
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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aah, thank you so much jenny! I'm an Aussie, so I definitely vibe with you. Love that word "koru". Bless you for your lovely six for this piece. It's been a long, long week.
:)Sharyn
Comment from Lulube
What an incredible hearfelt poem for Rose. She has seen much of life!!! Good for her. Her soul is full. Sleep baby sleep
lulube
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What an incredible hearfelt poem for Rose. She has seen much of life!!! Good for her. Her soul is full. Sleep baby sleep
lulube
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Bless you lulu! Thank you so very much for your lovely six, too ... and yes, I'm hoping she'll dream away ...
:)Sharyn
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You're lucky to know Rose in all her wisdom.
lulube
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
How beautiful to get the opportunity to sing to one who is passing. This is a wonderful tribute to Rose, who is with family in her last hours. Giddy
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How beautiful to get the opportunity to sing to one who is passing. This is a wonderful tribute to Rose, who is with family in her last hours. Giddy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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Thanks so much Giddy! :)Sharyn
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Sharon,
Accept my embrace in your time of sorrow. Like this poem, it was a beautiful thing you did. Take care--Ted
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Dear Sharon,
Accept my embrace in your time of sorrow. Like this poem, it was a beautiful thing you did. Take care--Ted
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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thx Ted - :)S
Comment from Opal H.
That's so beautiful, Sharyn! The poem as well as your story in the notes. Losing a loved one is always hard; knowing you will lose them is worse.
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That's so beautiful, Sharyn! The poem as well as your story in the notes. Losing a loved one is always hard; knowing you will lose them is worse.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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thank you Opal! :)S
Comment from Cry the Vile Rebel
These partings are so hard. You capture that poignant sweetness that you gifted to Rose when last you sang to her. I so admire that you could pull yourself out of your own sorrow and help your loved one on her way.
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These partings are so hard. You capture that poignant sweetness that you gifted to Rose when last you sang to her. I so admire that you could pull yourself out of your own sorrow and help your loved one on her way.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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thx so much Rebel! :)Sharyn
Comment from GregoryCody
I love this. Its so beautiful. After I read your notes it became all the more touching. Its so heartfelt. It really does touch me. I'm sorry for your pain. This piece is so well written. It has a superb flow, subtle and strong in places. I noticed the trochaic and iambic as I read ;)
Great poem...
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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I love this. Its so beautiful. After I read your notes it became all the more touching. Its so heartfelt. It really does touch me. I'm sorry for your pain. This piece is so well written. It has a superb flow, subtle and strong in places. I noticed the trochaic and iambic as I read ;)
Great poem...
Comment Written 09-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2013
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thx Greg - thought you might enjoy the trochee then the one iambic line - the more you do, the easier it gets, trust me on this! :))S
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I don't know about That, ;) but you do it with little effort it seems. I Did read each line very carefully the entire time, taking note. I knew what it was before the notes, ha. I was proud to see the "answer". I'm getting it! I just wrote a cinquain. Ill have to post it tonight.
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It didn't need iambic feet necessarily but I did it anyway as a challenge.
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good for you Greg! :)