Love Like Crazy, More Than Gold!
a word of advice from You Know Who - 1550 words52 total reviews
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well wirtten, sharyn, i had a hard time with the back and forth of conversation since it's supposed to be a letter. a little confusing to me, but you just put your spin on it. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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this is very well wirtten, sharyn, i had a hard time with the back and forth of conversation since it's supposed to be a letter. a little confusing to me, but you just put your spin on it. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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It's all ONE conversation though, sweets - Storyteller/God is the ONLY one who speaks until the very end. Do I need to clarify that even further??? All advice welcome!
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Comment from Tonulak
Dear Shron,
One of your unusual surreal takes on life done in a flamboyant theatrical manner. I saw one typo; "Oh yes dear, I could you screaming to me...", I think you meant "could hear you". Great job with this one--Ted
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reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Dear Shron,
One of your unusual surreal takes on life done in a flamboyant theatrical manner. I saw one typo; "Oh yes dear, I could you screaming to me...", I think you meant "could hear you". Great job with this one--Ted
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Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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dammit I've read this thing HOW many times and missed that! Thx for your eagle eyes Ted! Bless you - don't even know where this came from - I think I'm missing writing scripts, so might vanish underground for a while ... :)
