Comment from percival86jack

Excellent

What an very powerful presentation my friend. Upon opening, the image of course caught my attention and after reading your words, if all came together beautifully... kudos! Thanks for sharing! Cheers, Jack

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Thank you for the cheerful reveiw I do try to catch the readers attion at first it helps set the mood

Comment from bowls

Excellent

A very soft, sweet poem that speaks of soft sound and actually sounds that way itself. The words are calm, the rhythm flows, "soft and smooth". Beautifully composed.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Thank you I tried my hardest to put a lot of emotion into it thank you for the kind review

Comment from PoesyPoet

Excellent

A soft voice and comforting words can rock a person slowly to sleep. I like the though and the poem. Thanks for sharing. PP

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Your welcome I was trying my hardest to put the most emotions into this glad you liked it

Comment from Piggies Grandma

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem very much keimosobie. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. It is very lovely that your daughter is comforted by the sound of your voice.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Thanks I never really thought it of my fathers voice love the way you saw it though:)

Comment from cthomsen

Excellent

I really like this. My song of virtue, voice of reason - these are good lines. I like the imagery as well. It is a lovely poem.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Thank you I tried to put as much emotions as I could

Comment from debskatz

Excellent

Hey keimosobie,

There was nothing rocky about it! It's beautiful. Your daughter being comforted by the sound of your voice. I love it!

smiles,

deb

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Yea thanks for the kind of reveiw

Comment from Anisa-

Excellent

Well done with this poem. It flows well, the descriptions are great and the message is clear. I enjoyed reading this as I'm sure many others have too.

Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind reveiw

Comment from Doc Holiday

Excellent

I read your beatiful poem twice through. The first time I envision a young child sitting on the lap of his parent listening to his voice. The second time, I envisioned an adult listening to his child tell a story. Your poem seemed to work well in both perspectives. Very well-done!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

Oh nice perspective I didn't see it that way great way to see the poem though thanks for the kind reveiw

Comment from Karen Payton Holt

Excellent

Hi there keimosobie, this is great, he we are distracted by the essence of the person, their beloved gestures, their expression's that entrance...and the unsaid things in their tone of voice. Children are such precious jewels, to be appreciated at every opportunity.
Great poem.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

thanks for the reveiw-keimosobe's daughter

Comment from Amy Comstock

Excellent

This is beautiful! I love what you expressed here. One question...should it be the voice calling in the darkness? Just wondering. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2012

yes omg I totaly missed it thank you!!!!

reply by Amy Comstock on 13-Feb-2012

You are so welcome! We all do the typo thing!!