Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Embrace Integrity"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
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Comment from delysia hendricks
Good lessons to be had in your piece, Sarah. You're a very talented poet with effortless rhyming skills.
A merry Christmas to you and yours.
Delysia
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Good lessons to be had in your piece, Sarah. You're a very talented poet with effortless rhyming skills.
A merry Christmas to you and yours.
Delysia
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from jon tom
A good poem about being true to your safe a nice read and a good peace of writing. To be true to your safe and stand up for the right things in life
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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A good poem about being true to your safe a nice read and a good peace of writing. To be true to your safe and stand up for the right things in life
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from robina1978
Loved the art you used that complements your poem well. Is part a metaphor of a higher being?
Liked the main message you brought honesty and integrity. We can use some more of that nowadays. Nice flow and rhyme.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Loved the art you used that complements your poem well. Is part a metaphor of a higher being?
Liked the main message you brought honesty and integrity. We can use some more of that nowadays. Nice flow and rhyme.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
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no problem, I know the feeling of running behind, Ine
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Thank you so much!
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
very nicely primed, penned and
presented, Sarah.
i wholeheartedly agree but,
unfortunately, our free will
messes things up -though long
may it continue. it's a very
lovely ideology, but heaven
doesn't work! thank you for
sharing, and muchly merry crimbo
wishes. warmly, xx, eph.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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very nicely primed, penned and
presented, Sarah.
i wholeheartedly agree but,
unfortunately, our free will
messes things up -though long
may it continue. it's a very
lovely ideology, but heaven
doesn't work! thank you for
sharing, and muchly merry crimbo
wishes. warmly, xx, eph.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from Cedar
This is an excellent poem and it carries such a strong message, not only for the young, but for everyone. Your
rhyming and flow are perfect. Great job. Bill
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This is an excellent poem and it carries such a strong message, not only for the young, but for everyone. Your
rhyming and flow are perfect. Great job. Bill
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from Val Crisson
"up the rugged road of integrity", what a great line. It seems no one wants to do that anymore, especially as you indicate in your notes the young. The seems to only understand instant gratification. Good job!
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"up the rugged road of integrity", what a great line. It seems no one wants to do that anymore, especially as you indicate in your notes the young. The seems to only understand instant gratification. Good job!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from alexisleech
Very wise words and beautifully written. Your poem flows and rhymes beautifully whilst imparting several excellent and inspiring messages. You are so right in what you say about the youngsters of today in your notes. There are so many negative influences, that it's a wonder that so many get through unscathed. Well done.
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Very wise words and beautifully written. Your poem flows and rhymes beautifully whilst imparting several excellent and inspiring messages. You are so right in what you say about the youngsters of today in your notes. There are so many negative influences, that it's a wonder that so many get through unscathed. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from Simple Reflection
I loved the poem. I, too, have a huge concern for young people and all of the things that they face.
I really like your ending stanza:
For here there are but a faithful few,
Who will pay the price to stand strong and true.
Come, My Loves, and walk with Me,
Up the rugged road of integrity.
It is very powerful and the message very clear.
Well done!
~D
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I loved the poem. I, too, have a huge concern for young people and all of the things that they face.
I really like your ending stanza:
For here there are but a faithful few,
Who will pay the price to stand strong and true.
Come, My Loves, and walk with Me,
Up the rugged road of integrity.
It is very powerful and the message very clear.
Well done!
~D
Comment Written 15-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from Veronica Grace
Your poem is filled with strength and wisdom. A picture of character and spirit. In its way, it tells a story of life and only a talented poet could make it read so smoothly.
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Your poem is filled with strength and wisdom. A picture of character and spirit. In its way, it tells a story of life and only a talented poet could make it read so smoothly.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from debsjubilantpoetry
Wow what a loving and spiritual poem you have written. The art is magnificent and the poem has excellent rhyming and a message for us all to live by. Merry Christmas. debs
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Wow what a loving and spiritual poem you have written. The art is magnificent and the poem has excellent rhyming and a message for us all to live by. Merry Christmas. debs
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
