My Little Muranos
the night life79 total reviews
Comment from chrissy8
I appreciated the authors note, because I didn't know what a murano was :-) Good free verse poem. Love the black background and the picture of the colorful drink, really adds to the atmosphere of the poem and the vision in the mind of the reader. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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I appreciated the authors note, because I didn't know what a murano was :-) Good free verse poem. Love the black background and the picture of the colorful drink, really adds to the atmosphere of the poem and the vision in the mind of the reader. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thank you very much.
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PS Ruffles have ridges. Just havin' a little fun with you.
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Ruffles?? LOL
Comment from cam nine
This transported me to another time and place; almost feeling a little "Buk" here. In a very good way.
Intelligent writing. Nice change. Enjoyed it mucho.
Cheers,
mortuck
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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This transported me to another time and place; almost feeling a little "Buk" here. In a very good way.
Intelligent writing. Nice change. Enjoyed it mucho.
Cheers,
mortuck
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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I enjoyed ur review as well. Straight. Honest. Good interpretation has arose in you.
Comment from Writingfundimension
You've set a fantastic mood and sense of place with this terrific poem. The recurring theme of the crossed legs took me from hope to not-a-chance and worked perfectly as a metaphor for the guy's emotions. Very atmospheric and extremely well written. Kind regards, Bev
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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You've set a fantastic mood and sense of place with this terrific poem. The recurring theme of the crossed legs took me from hope to not-a-chance and worked perfectly as a metaphor for the guy's emotions. Very atmospheric and extremely well written. Kind regards, Bev
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Well put. From hope to not a chance. lol Really that does tickle me. I love to gourmet cook as well. Settles the soul.
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Glad I could make you smile!
Comment from WilliamDeen
Nice poem. Very descriptive. I felt as if I was one of the lovely people in the bar with them with a drink in one of those Murano glasses. I can even feel the breeze from the slow moving fan. Billy
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Nice poem. Very descriptive. I felt as if I was one of the lovely people in the bar with them with a drink in one of those Murano glasses. I can even feel the breeze from the slow moving fan. Billy
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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I guess you did read it,huh? Thank you.
Comment from robyn corum
What a sensous poem. You say so much in between the lines. I'm not sure about your entire message? But I got a lot of it. Good job. Thanks for sharing -
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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What a sensous poem. You say so much in between the lines. I'm not sure about your entire message? But I got a lot of it. Good job. Thanks for sharing -
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Between the lines is where it's at. Thank you.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This well describes the enticement of the bar scene, drinks, women and atmosphere are well presented and know I know what a murano is!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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This well describes the enticement of the bar scene, drinks, women and atmosphere are well presented and know I know what a murano is!!! Debbie
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Oh we are all so cultured here, it must be our bar! Thank you.
Comment from DonnaMac
victortouche you take the reader into the bar. We can see the colours, feel the movement of air, hear the sounds and recognise the people.
Those legs
just scissorin'
and unscissorin' me.
Killer lines those. I think this is a terrific poem. So well constructed.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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victortouche you take the reader into the bar. We can see the colours, feel the movement of air, hear the sounds and recognise the people.
Those legs
just scissorin'
and unscissorin' me.
Killer lines those. I think this is a terrific poem. So well constructed.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Just leave trepidation at the door when you cross the threshold. Thank you.
Comment from Piggies Grandma
This was a bit different to the usual poem I read but it was cleverly written and well thought out Victor. I liked the picture too.
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This was a bit different to the usual poem I read but it was cleverly written and well thought out Victor. I liked the picture too.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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I am pleased to change it up for you. Thank you.
Comment from laren
A very good poem that takes us to that mysterious place, full of feelings and sensations transmitted from the author when he see a cross-legged through the Murano glass .
Congratulations!
Laren
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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A very good poem that takes us to that mysterious place, full of feelings and sensations transmitted from the author when he see a cross-legged through the Murano glass .
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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I think I ended up cross-eyed. Thank you.
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Thank you for sharing,
Laren
Comment from Kpj731
wonderfully written. i thought you did an awesome job on this piece. i didn't know what a Muranos was untill reading your notes. again, good job.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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wonderfully written. i thought you did an awesome job on this piece. i didn't know what a Muranos was untill reading your notes. again, good job.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thank you Kpj. How is Philedelphia? Worth a detour? Just know nothing about the town.
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I would say if you are a history buff, it's worth the detour. We have some awesome museums and historic sites. Its NYC lite really. lol!