Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Golden Treasure"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
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Comment from Gabriella 2
great
this is a lovely poem which shows how love is beautiful and it's written so well. i really enjoyed reading it.
great job
Gabriella 2
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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great
this is a lovely poem which shows how love is beautiful and it's written so well. i really enjoyed reading it.
great job
Gabriella 2
Comment Written 02-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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Thank you Gabriella for your wonderful review, I'm really honoured.
Comment from richard7
You have a good spiritual uplifting message written with this,plain facts and to the point.
Life is not just a fantasy land,
a playground on a golden strand.
This line says a lot in content.
Reality isn't always a cash dream and not the ultimate reward either really.
Spelling and grammar is fine, i like the spirit coming from the flower in the cool picture!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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You have a good spiritual uplifting message written with this,plain facts and to the point.
Life is not just a fantasy land,
a playground on a golden strand.
This line says a lot in content.
Reality isn't always a cash dream and not the ultimate reward either really.
Spelling and grammar is fine, i like the spirit coming from the flower in the cool picture!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2010
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Thank you Richard for your wonderful review, your insight into it and comments.
Comment from Valkarie
This is a wonderful penned poem that is concise and so visual within the minds eye. Your narration is most expressive and so artistic with an emotional feel about it. Inspiring and well executed with impeccable word play your poem is eloquently written and has that balance which makes it a most creative written poem.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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This is a wonderful penned poem that is concise and so visual within the minds eye. Your narration is most expressive and so artistic with an emotional feel about it. Inspiring and well executed with impeccable word play your poem is eloquently written and has that balance which makes it a most creative written poem.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you Valkarie for your excellent review. I'm greatly honoured.
Comment from annettebda
I think that this a truly inspiring write with its wisdom and deeply held conviction. I also feel that your command of the English language in its written form is impressive. Congratulations on a great write.
Annette
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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I think that this a truly inspiring write with its wisdom and deeply held conviction. I also feel that your command of the English language in its written form is impressive. Congratulations on a great write.
Annette
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you Annette for your inspiring review about my poem. I'm greatly honoured.
Comment from The Stranger
"Be faithful now My dearest love,
to the heavenly sunshine from above.
Treasure your faith above all else,
in your heart God's Love still dwells."
A GOOD STORY THAT (IN MY VIEW) explores the fact that God loves all, sinners included
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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"Be faithful now My dearest love,
to the heavenly sunshine from above.
Treasure your faith above all else,
in your heart God's Love still dwells."
A GOOD STORY THAT (IN MY VIEW) explores the fact that God loves all, sinners included
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much Stranger for your excellent review about my poem. I'm greatly honoured.
Comment from FredCollingwood
It's clear this poem was written with a lot of passion and that's an ingredient that turns ordinary words into poetry. Well done.
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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It's clear this poem was written with a lot of passion and that's an ingredient that turns ordinary words into poetry. Well done.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2010
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Thank you FredCollingwood for your excellent review of my poem. I'm greatly honoured.