Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Wow you!!! What a complicated fiasco they face, eh? Seems there is something new every time they turn around I'm loving your ability to know the scenes and the right lingo to write this. Much research? A believable story for sure and love the actual tie-ins. Bravo.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2010

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010

Lots of research. Thank you very much for your kind comments. Regards, Bill

reply by Gungalo on 28-Nov-2010

My pleasure, Bill. I'm enjoying this.

Comment from Lekatt

Excellent

Great detective work by Dax. I like this story and have read other chapters of this book. It is an interesting mystery that I will try to follow. Good work.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2010

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010

Thank you for reading and for your continued support! Regards, Bill

Comment from Shirley B

Exceptional

Great chapter. The story is getting very intering. I am not even going to ask you how you even know about torture and getting people to talk. Every chapter keep making me want to read more. Great job, Shirley

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2010

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010

Thank you very much Shirley - I appreciate your support of this book and much appreciate the compliment of the 6! Regards, Bill

Comment from sizemore0409

Excellent

I found this story-segment to be very enjoyable reading. Mostly driven by a skillfully constructed dialogue between intriguing characters, the flow was excellent and the content served to grab and hold the reader's interest. Well done!

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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2010

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2010

Thanks for reading and for your kind feedback. Regards, Bill