Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "What a Beauty!"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
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Comment from adewpearl
What a clever witch - while all the others have outdone each other with spells to look gorgeous, she has cast a spell on herself to look hilariously quirky, thus standing out and showing the prince she has a sense of humor and individuality.
What a fun way to incorporate the theme of orange socks into micro fiction - great humor and a fun reveal at the end, showing she actually is a beauty :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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What a clever witch - while all the others have outdone each other with spells to look gorgeous, she has cast a spell on herself to look hilariously quirky, thus standing out and showing the prince she has a sense of humor and individuality.
What a fun way to incorporate the theme of orange socks into micro fiction - great humor and a fun reveal at the end, showing she actually is a beauty :-) Brooke
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Brooke,
Sort of a witchy Cinderella, I guess...Thanks for the wonderful review. As always, I appreciate your comments and generous thoughts. Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This was a cute, funny story and all in 100 words. You followed the contest ruled and pick and addressed a theme. I like the orange socks with combat boots.
SPAG: as they danced and charmed the him - I do not think you need the the
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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This was a cute, funny story and all in 100 words. You followed the contest ruled and pick and addressed a theme. I like the orange socks with combat boots.
SPAG: as they danced and charmed the him - I do not think you need the the
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Eliz
I removed the the three times...is it still there? Evil Eddie must not like me today...Thanks for the review...Smiles, Carol
Comment from JudithMarie
Orange socks are very cleverly woven into your story. Story very well done, not forced, in 100 words.
One nit: 3rd line, no 'the" just him.
Your words created images and emotions throughout. I smiled at the humor and smiled at the twist at the end. I enjoyed. Wish you the best in the contest. JudithMarie
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Orange socks are very cleverly woven into your story. Story very well done, not forced, in 100 words.
One nit: 3rd line, no 'the" just him.
Your words created images and emotions throughout. I smiled at the humor and smiled at the twist at the end. I enjoyed. Wish you the best in the contest. JudithMarie
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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JudithMarie
Thank you so much for the kind review. Glad you enjoyed the silly little story. smiles, Carol
Comment from AnnaLinda
Begin Again,
Your micro fiction entry is a very clever story within that short word limit. So, Prince Gargoyle saw her beauty all along, so to speak?
Loved your dancing artwork too!
Linda
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Begin Again,
Your micro fiction entry is a very clever story within that short word limit. So, Prince Gargoyle saw her beauty all along, so to speak?
Loved your dancing artwork too!
Linda
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Linda,
Thanks for the kind review...I hope it proves beauty is only skin deep or in the eyes of the beholder...Smiles, Carol
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You are welcome!
Comment from jadapenn
LOL! This was priceless, my friend. You always have the most delicious thoughts. Well done for a 100 words. My you told a whole story.
Best wishes for the contest. luv jada
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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LOL! This was priceless, my friend. You always have the most delicious thoughts. Well done for a 100 words. My you told a whole story.
Best wishes for the contest. luv jada
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Jada,
I find the micro fictions far more difficult than regular stories...Hard to control my words or mouth I guess...LOL
Glad you enjoyed.
smiles, CArol
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
This is an excellent little story. I have read lots of your work in the past and always find it enjoyable. Good luck in the contest, i hope you do well.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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This is an excellent little story. I have read lots of your work in the past and always find it enjoyable. Good luck in the contest, i hope you do well.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Goldwell,
Thank you for the gracious review. I am pleased that you enjoyed this silly story. It's difficult for me to limit my words...Smiles, Carol
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
Oh, that picture is smashing; I love it.
I wonder if the rule of 'cold hands, warm heart' always rings true.
The prince may have taken quite a chance.
But, alls well that ends well.
'..as they danced and charmed (the) him.
Juliette
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Oh, that picture is smashing; I love it.
I wonder if the rule of 'cold hands, warm heart' always rings true.
The prince may have taken quite a chance.
But, alls well that ends well.
'..as they danced and charmed (the) him.
Juliette
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Juliette,
I made one change and messed up another. Thank you for catching that error and for the kind review. Smiles, Carol
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I do that all the time too.
J
Comment from lola29
Carol, your entry is terrific. I think you've entered a winner for sure. I love the visual you chose, and it adds to your story perfectly.
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Carol, your entry is terrific. I think you've entered a winner for sure. I love the visual you chose, and it adds to your story perfectly.
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Lola,
Such a silly little story...I think it is more difficult to write these micro-fictions than a regular story. I hate being limited in words. Thanks for the review. Smiles, Carol
